Some people think they should keep all the money they earn without having to pay taxes to the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary life, there are many people who believe they should save all the money they earn without paying taxes to the authorities. From my perspective, this argument has advantages for living conditions and helps people save money for their life. However, it has more drawbacks than advantages such as the financial status of a country and this essay will examine and support my opinion.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people not having to pay taxes because this is their own money. First, government subsidies for salaries are believed to equalize working opportunities among people regardless of their family background. This financial support presumably tends not only to increase the overall amount of money rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, not paying taxes and keep all the money would result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that knowledgeable and skilled human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technology in any nation
On the other hand, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once people keep all their money and not having to pay taxes. First, offering all people keep their own money but don’t pay taxes would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on a country. Generating no income from taxes, the government could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding to develop the country, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare systems and transport infrastructure. Second, not having to pay taxes would tempt many young people including those who are not aware of taxes inclined or show no interest in developed countries, thereby adding great burden for government and state and potentially wasting time that these young people could spend their money for taxes and living standards. It, instead, would be a financially viable option if the resources were focused on supporting less privileged yet gifted people.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of keeping all the money that people earn, it helps them to live better. However, it means that the financial strain on a country to support other areas and developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25459317585 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69840527112 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538057742782 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8226616625 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285696143912 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11045354529 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105791020988 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17616730923 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320436021013 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.