The maps show the changes a bookstore in 200 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features relevant.
The maps show the information about how a bookstore and its surrounding in 2000 and now.
It is clear that, the cafe witness radical changes with the most noticeable being the fiction and table in the entrance.
Look at the map in 2000, the bookstore was designed in 2000 included one non-fiction, fiction, one travel, one new books, one service desk, one art, hobbies and cookery. The entrance directly accessible one travel and the non-fiction is below to. Look at the map now, the bookstore and non-fiction is replaced is cafe. With art and hobbies, cookery located convenient way for people, the service next to the cafe and skill painting areas replaced three table.
While the entrance remain in the left, and go to bookstore we will see travel first. Meanwhile, compared in 2000, today bookstore has one art, hobbies, cookery, one fiction, non-fiction, an cafe, service desk, travel, new books and three table. Besides, fiction in 2000 at the top but now fiction is next to cookery and non-fiction in 2000 is below to by now non-fiction next to fiction. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features can be seen that, book store have few places than in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'table' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tables'.
Suggestion: tables
...and skill painting areas replaced three table. While the entrance remain in the lef...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ies, cookery, one fiction, non-fiction, an cafe, service desk, travel, new books a...
^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'table' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tables'.
Suggestion: tables
...rvice desk, travel, new books and three table. Besides, fiction in 2000 at the top bu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88177339901 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59553092841 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9051618489 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172836601045 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901605550736 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998185706429 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134349518845 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948229801139 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.