In the modern world, opportunities of internet is becoming more affect on our life, also on our shopping habits such as buying our needs on the internet. This increasing trend has a lot of benefits although its few drawbacks. Firstly, this essay will discuss the advantages of online shopping in term of comfort and time, followed by an analysis of its limitations.
Product buying on the internet brings remarkable comfort to people’s life. It is clear that to searching shopping site and choosing any goods whatever you want is much easier than seeking for shops in the streets or malls. For instance, in order to buy part of my car on “eBay”, I need just type in its name on site and clicking some buttons while I need to make big effort to find it on shops. Online shopping has also benefits in point of time. It is possible to enforce the shopping in a short time whilst it sometimes take a long time to head out all of shops to find product you want or to wait in some cases. For example, if you want buy air ticket, you can wait for your turn for hours while you can done it on the site of airways in a few minutes.
However, in some occasions, this system has restrictions such as difficulties on identifying the precise size, material or color of goods. But it weak reason to not using shopping on the internet, because it is unlikely to occur. According to statistics of “Amazon”, it is demonstrated the great pleasure of people using online shopping.
On balance, clear benefits of buying things on the internet, easily outweigh flawed arguments about it.
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? 77
- Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 70
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255663430421 0.247107548796 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.15857605178 0.15552993741 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0647249190939 0.0946569551029 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0776699029126 0.0437536398559 178% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165048543689 0.122223957237 135% => OK
Participles: 0.0647249190939 0.0403219363162 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64330176806 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388349514563 0.0326786765898 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00323624595469 0.00163938923432 197% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0776699029126 0.0861751148067 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00970873786408 0.0214082191602 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00323624595469 0.0119246538136 27% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1602.0 1933.38276553 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.052104208 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68085106383 6.10592293882 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20519365927 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320284697509 0.37474360046 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231316725979 0.284197041944 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185053380783 0.203843217982 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.085409252669 0.137313986986 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64330176806 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.560935902166 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.3865900512 60.7401812628 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6153846154 20.7725350517 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8409940197 49.5273876611 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8367346939 93.4120437189 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.425170068 15.2821509519 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.530612244898 0.594174754866 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01102204409 140% => OK
Readability: 44.7470572132 49.1922392462 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.80722891566 1.69127372897 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.385147633107 0.332604825255 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104833152532 0.102734651613 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724324731589 0.0668474354756 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565609832925 0.534917948617 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178967652229 0.148666948902 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164625848256 0.13441755203 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811750428046 0.0742828286743 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299867582187 0.324241079732 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0730705098231 0.0640056729886 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280215010042 0.22793763319 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769316630729 0.0582452615562 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.493987976 76% => OK
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9