As everyone knows, in these days, rapid pace of development and technology leaded to migrate many people to big cities for using their good facilities. This kind of change causes revolution in housing industry from ordinary building and houses to very simple accommodations. In my point of view, this industry should’ve still stood in past way.
In one side we have old fashion way in building industry. In this way, buildings designed to last for a long time. Residential constructions are an obvious instance of these kind of architecture, made by better material for sure and they have more quality indeed. On the other hand, they are absolutely expensive and just some part of society fulfills to purchase them. Of course if we faced with lack of time, this method cannot be very useful due to long term duration are consumed for building.
On the other side we faced with new method of accommodation building. These are cheaper and quicker ones but according to their origin nature of design, the materials are not as good as in the other type. But as result of materials type, which constructors used, these apartments are suitable for economic climate of nowadays people. For example, for students who wants to be a tenant or even for young couple. In addition, these accommodations could be a way to decrease housing inadequate.
Beyond shadow of doubt, if I want to compare these two method, I can say each of them has some merits and demerits that make them suitable for some conditions. Meanwhile I believe in future, the world is going to face with a revolution in construction industry which I hope lead to improved quality of life for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
As everyone knows, in these days, rapid ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e old fashion way in building industry. In this way, buildings designed to last fo...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...onstructions are an obvious instance of these kind of architecture, made by better materia...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ake them suitable for some conditions. Meanwhile I believe in future, the world is going...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...r some conditions. Meanwhile I believe in future, the world is going to face with a revo...
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in past way.
in a past way.
buildings designed to last for a long time
buildings are designed to last for a long time
due to long term duration are consumed for building.
Description: check books how to use 'due to'.
for students who wants to be a tenant
for students who want to be a tenant
these two method,
these two methods,
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'of course', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269841269841 0.247107548796 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.114285714286 0.15552993741 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114285714286 0.0946569551029 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0349206349206 0.0501201869031 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0437536398559 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152380952381 0.122223957237 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0190476190476 0.0403219363162 47% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74795012959 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380952380952 0.0326786765898 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0761904761905 0.0861751148067 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00952380952381 0.0214082191602 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126984126984 0.0119246538136 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1673.0 1933.38276553 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.052104208 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8701754386 6.10592293882 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20519365927 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327464788732 0.37474360046 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.284197041944 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183098591549 0.203843217982 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102112676056 0.137313986986 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74795012959 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.560935902166 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.920420656 60.7401812628 112% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0911823647 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9333333333 20.7725350517 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2610013583 49.5273876611 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9297658863 93.4120437189 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2474916388 15.2821509519 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.501672240803 0.594174754866 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01102204409 200% => Read a good grammar book.
Readability: 43.9333333333 49.1922392462 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.24193548387 1.69127372897 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.197267657475 0.332604825255 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127175961783 0.102734651613 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0874774775302 0.0668474354756 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501595917758 0.534917948617 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124210483697 0.148666948902 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785040220036 0.13441755203 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401774368177 0.0742828286743 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334206435656 0.324241079732 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0434666301369 0.0640056729886 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133284834178 0.22793763319 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016638033515 0.0582452615562 29% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41883767535 205% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.88977955912 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.00200400802 150% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.493987976 86% => OK
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Rates: 70.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9