It is better for children if the whole families ( e.g aunts , uncles and grandparents ) are involved in the children's upbringing , rather than their fathers and mothers only . Do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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It is unvirsally acknowledged that ,family is all in all for everyone. Prese...
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...ect on today's children has led to the question whether children should be raised in joint fami...
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... raised in joint families in which aunts , uncles and grandparents contribute in b...
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...rents contribute in bringing up children . Although a joint family is better in ra...
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...ts contribute in bringing up children . Although a joint family is better in raising chi...
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...int family is better in raising children . A number of arguments surround my opini...
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... number of arguments surround my opinion . To begin with , in a joint family , ...
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...s surround my opinion . To begin with , in a joint family , children's upb...
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...n . To begin with , in a joint family , children's upbringing becomes very...
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...so many people to take care of the child . So being the mother or father , even if...
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...he child . So being the mother or father , even if you are busy in life with work ...
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... life with work or any other commitments , you have no need to worry about your ch...
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...as you know he/she will be taken care of , fed properly and even made sure that ho...
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...ven made sure that homework is completed . This is a huge relief especially in tim...
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...cially in times of sickness of the child . So in a joint family , you can be total...
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...ness of the child . So in a joint family , you can be totally focused as far as yo...
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... far as your career or work is concerned , without the tension of your children . ...
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...d , without the tension of your children . Secondly , a joint family teaches th...
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...e tension of your children . Secondly , a joint family teaches the value of adj...
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...s the value of adjusting and flexibility , which can go a long way in life when su...
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...n a totally new or different environment , which unfortunately people brought up i...
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... a nuclear family with all comforts and less adjustments might find difficult . Chil...
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...nd less adjustments might find difficult . Children living in joint family learn h...
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...erstand the dynamics of human psychology , as they are staying with various people...
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...ith various people of different attitude , perception and behaviour . In the long ...
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...rent attitude , perception and behaviour . In the long run , it becomes easy to ga...
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...rception and behaviour . In the long run , it becomes easy to gauge and understand...
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...and understand people and their emotions . Finally , parents do not have to dea...
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...d people and their emotions . Finally , parents do not have to deal with attent...
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...ly by-products of nuclear family systems , where the child , finding both parents ...
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...nuclear family systems , where the child , finding both parents absent and no one ...
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...s absent and no one else from the family , usually resorts to attention seeking be...
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...ly resorts to attention seeking behavior . Such behaviour can manifest as being sa...
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...Such behaviour can manifest as being sad , insolent , and reclusive among other th...
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...our can manifest as being sad , insolent , and reclusive among other things . T...
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...olent , and reclusive among other things . To put it in a nutshell , I pen down...
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...ther things . To put it in a nutshell , I pen down saying that , in a joint fam...
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...t in a nutshell , I pen down saying that , in a joint family a child is reared by ...
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... a child is reared by a number of people , thus dividing work and saving time . Th...
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...ple , thus dividing work and saving time . The child also learns quantities of und...
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... also learns quantities of understanding , adjusting , & selflessness . For workin...
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... quantities of understanding , adjusting , & selflessness . For working parents , ...
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...derstanding , adjusting , & selflessness . For working parents , it's a bless...
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...g , & selflessness . For working parents , it's a blessing to have reliable ,...
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... , it's a blessing to have reliable , trustworthy caretakers for their child ...
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..., trustworthy caretakers for their child . Therefore it is better to raise a child...
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...rustworthy caretakers for their child . Therefore it is better to raise a child in a join...
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...etter to raise a child in a joint family .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'you know', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225663716814 0.247107548796 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.154867256637 0.15552993741 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0884955752212 0.0946569551029 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575221238938 0.0501201869031 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0420353982301 0.0437536398559 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12610619469 0.122223957237 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0403219363162 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86860702472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265486725664 0.0326786765898 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00663716814159 0.00163938923432 405% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0818584070796 0.0861751148067 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132743362832 0.0214082191602 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176991150442 0.0119246538136 148% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2377.0 1933.38276553 123% => OK
No of words: 437.0 316.052104208 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42694063927 6.10592293882 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20519365927 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311212814645 0.37474360046 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226544622426 0.284197041944 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160183066362 0.203843217982 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938215102975 0.137313986986 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86860702472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469107551487 0.560935902166 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.8171728831 60.7401812628 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0911823647 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7058823529 20.7725350517 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.9208872624 49.5273876611 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0066079295 93.4120437189 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3634361233 15.2821509519 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411894273128 0.594174754866 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 5.01102204409 958% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.3603445955 49.1922392462 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.55652173913 1.69127372897 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.333424745946 0.332604825255 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0929589944975 0.102734651613 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740415330681 0.0668474354756 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559242876497 0.534917948617 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173096794285 0.148666948902 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129639228263 0.13441755203 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581481022797 0.0742828286743 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269254202199 0.324241079732 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0600641075683 0.0640056729886 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20915329807 0.22793763319 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622690427891 0.0582452615562 107% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.88977955912 187% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.60220440882 115% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.493987976 152% => OK

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Rates: 77.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9