Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behaviour. Discuss both views.
There is a growing violence on television and in computer games in recent years. Some people claim that this trend is having a negative impact on society. Others argue that this type of entertainment can bring people more benefits.
On the one hand, many people argue that the amount of violence on TV or computer games should be restricted or even prohibited. They state that these lead people, who are transported into virtual world or spend almost all their time in front of TV's screen, to commit bad behaviour. The Italian study that participants who played a violent video game for only 35 mi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28125 0.247107548796 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.1375 0.15552993741 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09375 0.0946569551029 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.025 0.0501201869031 50% => More adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.034375 0.0437536398559 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134375 0.122223957237 110% => OK
Participles: 0.028125 0.0403219363162 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59650225873 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015625 0.0326786765898 48% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.078125 0.0861751148067 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01875 0.0214082191602 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.0119246538136 210% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1669.0 1933.38276553 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.052104208 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96071428571 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20519365927 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339285714286 0.37474360046 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.284197041944 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160714285714 0.203843217982 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.137313986986 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59650225873 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.560935902166 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.8807403003 60.7401812628 97% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5384615385 20.7725350517 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8015738106 49.5273876611 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.384615385 93.4120437189 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 15.2821509519 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.594174754866 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 46.5384615385 49.1922392462 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.25396825397 1.69127372897 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32282338663 0.332604825255 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115276664384 0.102734651613 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786788362058 0.0668474354756 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528903246633 0.534917948617 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147684704566 0.148666948902 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137560170882 0.13441755203 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994478655244 0.0742828286743 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2406979471 0.324241079732 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0455348134039 0.0640056729886 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25188826142 0.22793763319 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762974815916 0.0582452615562 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.88977955912 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.60220440882 346% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9