Some think that it is fair for convicts to spend time in position, while others think that community service would be better for criminals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Crimes and criminals are always a burden for the society and government. So many people want to see severe punishments for offenders, others feel social service is the best way to treat them. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with the idea of public service as a method of punishment.
Undeniably, through violation of rules, they disturbed the peace and order of the community. Therefore, they are obliged to compromise it with public service. Government is spending a large sum of money for the maintenance of the jails. If these people are doing some work instead of simply sit in the ...
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