Some people believe that,parent are only responsible for teach children of good member of society.However other people believe that parent are not only responsible for teach children significant role for learn of school.In my face of issue ,i would like to analyse both point of views before drawing sound and logical conclusion .
The first important point ,i would like to mention is that form the birth children have been educated in family mainly about the fundamental skill that like eating ,specking and each communication with other people .Another the lean how to flow the social rules for begin for a good member of society. Children are learn to begin knowledge provided the society people, they are know the how to co operate of society members.Children are learn the parent her culture religions and some things.
On the other hand ,parent are not only teach the children.However,when children becomes 4 or 5 years old he make the first friendship and may be co operative with new people who are the same ages and also there is a person who is called teacher .He can learn extra activities and he can experience the structures that he had been learned before in real situation in new environment called school.Teacher also provide the friendly environment of the school so they are easy to learn the new technology .children also find out the what is wrong or correct.
In my opinion, parent do not only responsible for the teach the children however,school are most responsible for learn to good member of society. when child are 4 to 5 years they are necessary for the new friend so they make the new friend for the same ages.children are learn the diverse educating item in this unit while he can experience.
In conclusion, people who contract with a child diverse ages affect on his or her education in order good member in society either they are parent or school.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251461988304 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116959064327 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046783625731 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0409356725146 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12865497076 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0321637426901 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86336035793 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233918128655 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00292397660819 0.00163938923432 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0906432748538 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233918128655 0.011925033212 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1909.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91021671827 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303405572755 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219814241486 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15479876161 0.203846283523 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108359133127 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86336035793 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482972136223 0.56093040696 86% => OK
Word variations: 48.6979371428 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.1428571429 20.7743622355 222% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 134.429406404 49.517814964 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.714285714 127.492653851 214% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1428571429 20.7743622355 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.814263465372 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 3.99599198397 951% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 68.1242812915 49.1944974215 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.67857142857 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37092771002 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.258638939097 0.102741220458 252% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.04339352626 0.0668466124924 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.873928743233 0.534860350844 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11723085307 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219680167996 0.134430193775 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990833305218 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348725809715 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114657596507 0.0638462369009 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236744940917 0.228012699653 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111881599899 0.058150111329 192% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9