The college year are the best time in person's life
Do agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason's to support your opinion
Initially, I want to talk about college life, when person enter the college allot of thing would change such as the way he spend time and how can benefit from it, I disagree with the best year would be the college year there is advantage in college year and disadvantage.
in the first , the first step the person do it how can choice the major that could success in it, like me I went to enter medical school but I can't enter it cause my grade didn't allow to me to enter it so that I enter architecture school, there is a lot of difficulties in architecture school like I can speed a lot of time with my family, the time I should spend with them I should spend to prepare for project, I can be financial dependable I depend on my family to give me money for my project, but when I graduated I can be responsible of myself.
Although in my college year I gain a lot of friend but we can spend lot time to have fun, just have time to get ready for exam of taking lecture.
the college year not the best because you have to study to be ready when you are graduated you can be responsible, actually you have to be committed and take the test and to success in all exam, but when you are not committed you can have fun you can spend lot of time with friend but you still take your budget from your parents and you have limited budget, in my college I know a lot of my friend work and study and they are so success in their life.
eventually the college year is the best because you have a lot of work to do you still depend on your family but lot of people consider college life the best because they have a lot of friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'a lot of' (=plenty)?
Suggestion: a lot of
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...f thing would change such as the way he spend time and how can benefit from it, I dis...
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...edical school but I can't enter it cause my grade didn't allow to me to ent...
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...amily, the time I should spend with them I should spend to prepare for project, I...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of friends'.
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...get ready for exam of taking lecture. the college year not the best because you h...
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Suggestion: Eventually
...and they are so success in their life. eventually the college year is the best because yo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of friends'.
Suggestion: a lot of friends
...college life the best because they have a lot of friend.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21387283237 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.173410404624 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0491329479769 0.0866891130778 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0260115606936 0.046263068375 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.147398843931 0.0685040099705 215% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115606936416 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0173410404624 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.29213215562 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0375722543353 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0635838150289 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0433526011561 0.0209618222197 207% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0202312138728 0.0139019557991 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1637.0 2387.08602151 69% => OK
No of words: 321.0 408.028673835 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09968847352 5.86048508987 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.208722741433 0.338922669872 62% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.152647975078 0.251872472559 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0747663551402 0.174417080927 43% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0529595015576 0.112833075102 47% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.29213215562 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.389408099688 0.524397521467 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.1311215591 59.2087087015 64% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6684587814 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 64.2 20.5533526081 312% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 158.137408604 48.84282405 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.4 120.699889404 271% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.2 20.5533526081 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.644075263715 217% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.4647975078 45.7405998639 174% => OK
Elegance: 1.0 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299132954994 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.327328210284 0.103427244359 316% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0874659295042 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.497263757937 201% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 9.93013661299e-17 0.151897553556 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205575028958 0.114077575197 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647696014865 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322913297102 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.063764022291 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205575028958 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647696014865 0.0618886996521 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 15.0 Out of 30