Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ot of things positive and negative in it , such us our life now a day .both of th...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ative in it , such us our life now a day .both of them have bright and dark side...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...tive in it , such us our life now a day .both of them have bright and dark side ...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ife now a day .both of them have bright and dark side . My Parents life in th...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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....both of them have bright and dark side . My Parents life in the past was so s...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...was so simple, the Technology was in the first stage there is just TV or Radio ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hnology was in the first stage there is just TV or Radio the distraction instru...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... first stage there is just TV or Radio the distraction instrument not lot, I r...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...dio the distraction instrument not lot, I remember my mother told me that the TV...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...I remember my mother told me that the TV channels was limited just two or three c...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'channel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'channels'.
Suggestion: channels
... channels was limited just two or three channel and there program finish in early time ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...l and there program finish in early time . and the obsess with appetences is less ...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...nd there program finish in early time . and the obsess with appetences is less than...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...here program finish in early time . and the obsess with appetences is less than now , in ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... obsess with appetences is less than now , in addition to , there is a lot of tim...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...bsess with appetences is less than now , in addition to , there is a lot of time ...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ences is less than now , in addition to , there is a lot of time to spend with fa...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...re is a lot of time to spend with family , laugh together , eat and chat with the ...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...me to spend with family , laugh together , eat and chat with the family member , t...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...er , eat and chat with the family member , the familial correlation strong . Th...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...member , the familial correlation strong . The disadvantage of my parents life ...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...rents life is there community was closed , for example when they did a research th...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...ample when they did a research they can depended in just the offer book they can find th...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...e a lot of time to read books and novels , my mother told me in the past when they...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...mmar more powerful. In the other hand , when we talk about our life there is a...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ful. In the other hand , when we talk about our life there is a lot of advanta...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...r life there is a lot of advantage in it , such as the Technology is more developm...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...gs that’s make our life more easily but more faster the time pass away we can't feel i...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... time pass away we can't feel in it ,now the time we spend with family is lit...
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Line 7, column 445, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...tle because of social media make us busy . Despite of that when we need a specific...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...nd it in the internet. The conclusion , I think the life is better for next gen...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...pend all the time in it and depend on it , because make them less productivity and...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...less productivity and there mind doesn’t working in good way . we can benefit fro...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ss productivity and there mind doesn’t working in good way . we can benefit from our p...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... there mind doesn’t working in good way . we can benefit from our parents life in...
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Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ere mind doesn’t working in good way . we can benefit from our parents life in sp...
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Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...d more books spend more time with family .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245524296675 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.074168797954 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562659846547 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107416879795 0.0685040099705 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122762148338 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0102301790281 0.0351676179071 29% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41213483652 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0076726342711 0.0309702414327 25% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0895140664962 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153452685422 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102301790281 0.0139019557991 74% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1965.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18469656992 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.221635883905 0.338922669872 65% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.158311345646 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110817941953 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0606860158311 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41213483652 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398416886544 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.2067524682 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6684587814 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.375 20.5533526081 230% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 118.325557256 48.84282405 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.625 120.699889404 204% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.375 20.5533526081 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.54480286738 667% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.2061345646 45.7405998639 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.28695652174 1.45489161554 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209835536755 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.208365318088 0.103427244359 201% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662846604161 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.811180481604 0.497263757937 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167107085459 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133513362966 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624584068215 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370485342923 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0758237985099 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164094757145 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055826616219 0.0618886996521 90% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK

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Rates: 63 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 19 Out of 30