compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents.which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
Today's life,well its become easier for everyone.My way of life and my parents way of life has several differences. In today's world with all the new technologies and everything I think the way I live my life would be more satisfying for the future generations.
Firstly, The way I live is more suitable for future generations than my parents way of life. For instance my daily source of news is about in and around the world is the internet.On the other hand my parents would prefer reading a newspaper or watch television or listen to the news on the radio.In present way of living everyone looks for easier ways of living and with the technologies we have everything at our fingertips.that is the mobile phone and the internet. Another instance is paying of electricity,gas or rents where our parents has a habit of doing it by going all the way to the office and doing it, on the contrary I would do it on my phone sitting at home. I think my way would be a great choice of living for the coming generations.
Secondly,I love to travel because it helps me be a better person and it helps me expand my horizons and know about different cultures and languages. Although my parents barely travel . they just work and earn and save as much as possible and never think about themselves.there is so much in the world out there to see and with todays transportation methods I think we must use it as much as we can . Life is all about being happy and satisfied and I think we must do everything that will make us happy and not regret anything in life. According to me I think even the future generations will want the same.
In conclusion, the way of life I live which is full of excitement and adventurous would be more satisfying for the future generations ,because I'm pretty sure they would want a life-like this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53495440729 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78013586856 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462006079027 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0598951635 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375449766561 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168280425953 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117241377561 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279405420389 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881259639773 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.