While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Today, many environmental problems need to be solve worldwide. This problems such as increase in the Earth's temperature and deforestation. Some people believe that global warming is much more detrimental, while others argue that deforestation is a major issue that needs to be solve first. In this essay, both sides will be weighed prior to reaching a conclusion.
It is felt by many that global warming absolutely plays a vital role in our planet's destruction. Scientists speculate that the ice in the North and South pole were starting to melt due to global warming that will lead to a chain reaction of problems. Such as increase in the Earth's water level and a terrible lost of habitats of polar animals. They also suggest that El Nino phenomenon will be frequently experienced in the next coming years. It is really obvious that global warming is a huge participant in killing our planet not only today but in the future.
On the other hand, some says that deforestation is a main concern that we must pay our attention to. Since the trees are responsible in making our world alive. Deforestation would result to some disastrous events like landslides, high concentration of carbon dioxide in the air and tremendous flood events. This will be experienced especially to those countries that does not have a strict law on proper logging.
To conclude, while deforestation result could result in catastrophic events, I believe that global warming is much more of a dilemma. Deforestation might be solved by having a firmer policy on logging and by continuously replacing the trees that were cut. While with global warming has a huge difference. Solutions are still being figured out and the results might be much worse than what scientists expect.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: This problems such as increase in the Earth's temperature and deforestation.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to This and problems
those countries that does not have a strict law on proper logging.
those countries that do not have a strict law on proper logging.
While with global warming has a huge difference.
While with global warming, it has a huge difference.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1434 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.812 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...al problems need to be solve worldwide. This problems such as increase in the Earths...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rting to melt due to global warming that will lead to a chain reaction of problem...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cern that we must pay our attention to. Since the trees are responsible in making our...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...usly replacing the trees that were cut. While with global warming has a huge differen...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240506329114 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.174050632911 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107594936709 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506329113924 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0284810126582 0.0437548338989 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0569620253165 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88056452774 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316455696203 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00316455696203 0.00163938923432 193% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0949367088608 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284810126582 0.021408717616 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158227848101 0.011925033212 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1768.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05479452055 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342465753425 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239726027397 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164383561644 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123287671233 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056452774 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.7237112134 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1764705882 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.481306586 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 41.149073328 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.675 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364162798087 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0552403229993 0.102741220458 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0414725481092 0.0668466124924 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472581846794 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921847333969 0.148594505496 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130645072545 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053015054542 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323659825166 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0486839382962 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252596771339 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338271629924 0.058150111329 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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