Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
The argument above asserts that telling truth is the crucial part of any relationship between people. This argument lends our discussion to a very significant question of how telling truth play a important role in any relationship between people? Although it is a broadly based argument which cannot be summed up in a paragraph or so, we need look no further than the fact that nowadays the most critical reason of divorce between couples is telling lie. That having be mentioned, I however adhere to this belief that telling truth is the most important part of any relationship for the reasons will be illustrated at length in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that, telling the truth all the time will bring about a change in people’s trust in each other. Trust is the primary factor of any relationship which cannot acquire easily. In a simple words, honesty will be followed by mutual trust. The best example that fit this notion is a relationship between a stockholder and customer. If the stockbroker does not transmit the real information about the share, the customer won’t rely on him anymore. So the broker will lose their customers gradually and it can impair brokerage's profit. It goes without saying that trust play the principal role which obtain in a long-term between people's relationship.
Aside from telling truth to gaining trust between people, we cannot lose our sight on the fact that, telling lie is prevalent between people in any relationship specially couples. It have many disadvantages. It engenders divorce and discomfort. To put it in apposite words, telling lie would be followed by another lie and second lie followed third one and so forth. Also telling lie decreases the intensity of love between couples. In addition, it can recedes people from each other. For the purpose of illustration, let’s take the example of my friend who lies to his husband that she and her friend had gone a trip. Then, she had to lie about a place where the went and she has to remember it to avoid telling the truth later. Hence, as is clear, telling lie has many disadvantages such as divorce, unhappiness and etc.
To wrap it up, telling truth is essential in relationship between people. It characterize people’s characteristics and let them to know each other. I completely agree with telling truth which bring trust between people and prevent them from separation and disturbance.
- TPO1 - Integrated 80
- TPO 4 - Integrated 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO2- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people 60
- TPO 5: Agree or disagree : People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment - Doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do. 72
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Essay evaluation report
how telling truth play a important role
how telling truth plays an important role
trust play the principal role which obtain in a long-term between people's relationship.
trust plays the principal role which obtains in a long-term between people's relationship.
Aside from telling truth to gaining trust between people
Aside from telling truth to gain trust between two people
Aside from telling truth to gain trust among two people
It have many disadvantages
It has many disadvantages
In addition, it can recedes people from each other.
In addition, it can recede people from each other.
let’s take the example of my friend who lies to his husband
let’s take the example of my friend who lies to her husband
telling truth is essential in relationship between people.
telling truth is essential in relationship among people.
It characterize people’s characteristics
It characterizes people’s characteristics
I completely agree with telling truth which bring trust between people
I completely agree with telling truth which brings trust among people
Sentence: In addition, it can recedes people from each other.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and recedes
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 415 350
No. of Characters: 2002 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.513 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.687 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.043 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.725 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.435 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cant question of how telling truth play a important role in any relationship betw...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... any relationship specially couples. It have many disadvantages. It engenders divorc...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd lie followed third one and so forth. Also telling lie decreases the intensity of ...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'recede'
Suggestion: recede
...ve between couples. In addition, it can recedes people from each other. For the purpose...
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Line 5, column 815, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...advantages such as divorce, unhappiness and etc. To wrap it up, telling truth is ess...
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Line 5, column 823, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es such as divorce, unhappiness and etc. To wrap it up, telling truth is essentia...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'characterizes'?
Suggestion: characterizes
...tial in relationship between people. It characterize people’s characteristics and let them t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'as to', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228070175439 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.168859649123 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0679824561404 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504385964912 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0570175438596 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127192982456 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0504385964912 0.0351676179071 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7672895884 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0219298245614 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00657894736842 0.00188951952338 348% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.111842105263 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0219298245614 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197368421053 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2467.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95893719807 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369565217391 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282608695652 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154589371981 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7672895884 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502415458937 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.7111923395 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2075015666 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.260869565 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 46.2608695652 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.46825396825 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525668040526 0.300154397459 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111971921162 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815547987607 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481111260661 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155864335146 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187912246583 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13777423955 0.0781384742642 176% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.415429239315 0.336927656856 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0500374528462 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375753546615 0.210909579961 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118290310592 0.0618886996521 191% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18 Out of 30