The author claims that the important characteristics of a society are best observed in its major cities. I, however, do not have absolute concordance with the author's sentiments.
Cities house a larger population from different walks of life. It is a cosmopolitan hub of people from different societal origin, and diverse cultural and religious background. Since we can observe all those diversities in the major cities, it is fitting to suggest that important characteristics of a society can be studied in the major cities.
However, unlike the suburbs, where people keep their friends, families and neighbors close and enjoy every other social, religious and cultural events joyfully and heartily; in cities, these aspects may not be followed with the same diligence and enthusiasm, as people, one way or the other are constantly short of time. Life is a shortcut in the cities, and the cultural aspects seem to be observed in just as haste as every other thing. Hence, a closer and accurate understanding of these characteristics may not be possible in the cities. Furthermore, some cultures are native to a place and can only be observed in the place of their origin, be it suburbs or cities. One particular example is the Bisket Jatra, a lively festival marking the beginning of the Nepalese new year, celebrated by the Newar community in the old town of Bhaktapur. One can study and understand this festival only in Bhaktapur as it is neither of significance to any other society nor celebrated by them. Additionally, certain societal characteristics like agriculture, superstitions and witchcraft can be seen only in some rural areas of Nepal. Though some of these are social evils, they are nonetheless characteristics of a society, and can be understood by the study of the society in which they are prevalent.
Although cities represent diversities in lifestyle and mores, it lacks authenticity and accuracy in their observations. Therefore, study of cities alone may not suffice for understanding the important characteristics of a society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235135135135 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.118918918919 0.157235817809 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108108108108 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513513513514 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378378378378 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127027027027 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0324324324324 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16973288764 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0108108108108 0.030933414821 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.118918918919 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243243243243 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00540540540541 0.0148568991511 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2061.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 331.0 452.878318584 73% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22658610272 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383685800604 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317220543807 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229607250755 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148036253776 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16973288764 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504531722054 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 52.0554356314 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0666666667 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4265540848 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 53.7887210473 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.8961038961 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420191929178 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11457923457 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816633262094 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560796480554 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0958278829589 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184362094602 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891869844531 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362607580287 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0765145048619 0.0692045440612 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295547118712 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534583531364 0.0653680567796 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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