In some countries, people want to have their child at a later age. What are the causes?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In most countries, people decided to have their own family much later than others. While this has been viewed as positive, there is also a negative consequence that needs to be considered. This essay will discuss the main cause of this trend as well as the benefits and drawbacks.
The prime reason for a decision to have a child later in an adult life is career growth. Since the majority of the people now invested a huge amount of money in tertiary education, they need to have an employment that enables them to pay off their debts. This will lead them to be more focus in their career and professional advancement rather than thinking of settling their own family. It is a common knowledge, for example, that professionals married and have children in their late thirties, unlike those who have not finished university that gets married at an earlier age.
The main advantages of raising child at later age are financial stability and maturity of both parents. Children that were born by older parents experienced greater convenience in life. Parents have the capacity to provide them all the needed care and financial support. Furthermore, they also capable of providing a good nurturing environment because they are matured enough to handle their parenting responsibility. For instance, a child grows with matured parents can be sure of a secure and better future.
The principal disadvantage of having a child at matured stage of life is aged gap between the child and the parents. This will be an issue later in future if the age gap is more than thirty years. Being in a different generation, there will be a possibility of misunderstanding or misconception.
In conclusion, the decision of when the child will be born in a family is a personal choice. The advantage and disadvantage should be weighed to come up with an informed decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... to come up with an informed decision.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234604105572 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.099706744868 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351906158358 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381231671554 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126099706745 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0527859237537 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8438117384 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263929618768 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0058651026393 0.00163938923432 358% => OK
Determiners: 0.117302052786 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205278592375 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175953079179 0.011925033212 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93630573248 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331210191083 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257961783439 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18152866242 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117834394904 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8438117384 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.7457616108 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4705882353 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1880111825 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.647058824 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.2667665792 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.7625 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36343522534 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103272179153 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0601551615161 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522445271043 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109169809675 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136071788621 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751132096454 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326487562047 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0419616722752 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225657854246 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364156561718 0.058150111329 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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