You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter
– Describe your future wife/husband.
– What will happen at the wedding?
– Why do you want to invite him/her?
Hi Lizzy,
I hope you are fine. My wedding ceremony is coming up in two months time and I am writing to invite you to the event.
The woman I am getting married to is a tall, fair, beautiful young lady, who is in her early twenties. I met her during a charity event, organized by my company, at an orphanage home. She came with some friends, and was introduced to me by a colleague of mine on that same occasion. I observed with admiration how she cared for the kids at the orphanage and that endeared her to me immediately. She is a good cook and can prepare both local and international dishes.
The marriage ceremony is a fun packed event. First their will be the maiden dance, during which, the bride is expected to dance with some maidens. At some point, the groom will join the bride and her maidens in the dance, while the father of the bride watches on to see how the groom carters for the daughter. If he is not satisfied or finds out that the man he wants to give the daughter to was attracted to another lady during the dance, he can call off the marriage immediately. This activity is followed by a toast and the cutting of cake, after which, everybody is given food to eat. During this period, people can bring their gifts and the man and woman are officially pronounced husband and wife.
I am inviting you to this event so you could use this opportunity to witness our culture and compare it with your own. I have once witnessed a marriage ceremony by two Canadians. Though it was fun too, but not as thrilling as ours. You will also use this opportunity to visit some nice sites in Nigeria. There are several locations here, that visitors troop to. I will keep the list as secrete until you arrive.
My dear friend, this is one journey you will relish to tell the stories to everyone and I look forward to seeing you.
Yours friend,
Chinedu.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20725388601 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.163212435233 0.167888034529 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0492227979275 0.0606518309736 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310880829016 0.0506257000042 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0984455958549 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0958549222798 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0362694300518 0.041066498444 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38188166919 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466321243523 0.0385302599488 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00777202072539 0.00132118243153 588% => OK
Determiners: 0.111398963731 0.0714148451538 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233160621762 0.0191574576366 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129533678756 0.00930345855455 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1876.0 1141.60824742 164% => OK
No of words: 346.0 206.134020619 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42196531792 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 3.78085437643 114% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268786127168 0.284621296913 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199421965318 0.211203875043 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127167630058 0.133321485273 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0693641618497 0.0843313296314 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38188166919 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.622163163488 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.9140395509 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 12.9587628866 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4761904762 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7110989515 44.7399317507 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 90.9928171075 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 36.418387008 37.5504026743 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.1592920354 1.13073093955 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369859053106 0.331212695627 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10082295324 0.0927372745006 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0950248612409 0.0736520305886 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501017756263 0.579516596996 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201178815498 0.180689518051 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11585530685 0.122183219658 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076346943792 0.0765303033291 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275067579006 0.211926503985 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0774288260329 0.0737400523855 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23830322238 0.203819188451 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345572986127 0.067151250289 51% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.45360824742 188% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 4.73195876289 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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