Education, in common parlance, is to gain knowledge. But, can we obtain knowledge only from books? A man not necessarily can learn only from the formal education. Education is not just what they teach in school, college or university. There are some other sources of wisdom and knowledge like nature, and sometimes the source can be another person. Nonetheless, in many circles, it is believed that a man can attain knowledge only from an educated person, and he cannot learn anything from someone without formal education. I utterly disagree with ruling believe and deem that we can learn from an uneducated person as well.
First off, we should consider that people have variety of lifestyles and therefore they can experience unique situations, so someone without formal education may have a wide range of knowledge. They are sharp enough to learn from their lifetime experiences. A very good example is my grandmother. He was unschooled individual who could forecast weather precisely. It is because he was a farmer and capable of gathering information about seasonal changes, he was observing in sky, on his mind. Later he could use these patterns to prepare for coming climate changes, like storms and heavy rains. My father was an educated man even so he learned basics knowledge about foreseeing weather from his mother.
Similarly, some businessmen, who are less educated, has a few tricks in their sleeves that can help them compete with educated freshmen in markets nowadays. In fact, they have employees, who got degree on marketing; however, they take orders and directions from them. Another example is artists. We can find the finest artists in human history without any formal education, Leonardo da vinci was one of them, he only had informal education, and not in painting. Mona Lisa is the name of one of his exquisite portraits.
To wrap up, we can learn both from education and nature, and some people simply has a gift in particular subjects. From what has been explained above, it can be easily concluded that in many cases an educated person can learn from uneducated people.
- Some people argue for a broad university education in which students learn about many different subjects. Others argue for a specialized university education in which students learn only about a specific field of study. Which position do you agree with? U 73
- Good teachers set challenging task for students. Do you agree or disagree, and why? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...believe and deem that we can learn from a uneducated person as well. First off...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the finest'.
Suggestion: find the finest
...hem. Another example is artists. We can find finest artists in human history without any fo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'even so', 'in fact', 'in particular', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224747474747 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.15404040404 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681818181818 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0681818181818 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0782828282828 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121212121212 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66520471221 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010101010101 0.0309702414327 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.00188951952338 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.040404040404 0.0209618222197 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2104.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04597701149 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382183908046 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290229885057 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195402298851 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137931034483 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66520471221 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.5373257837 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5714285714 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1837992229 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.19047619 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.5944170772 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.24369747899 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0637286907109 0.300154397459 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0888127503073 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068800700515 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.431212492833 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158285431373 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237900341189 0.114077575197 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264806842504 0.0781384742642 34% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252385420512 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0231073490125 0.067059652881 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042986917464 0.210909579961 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143425504104 0.0618886996521 23% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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