Nowadays people are forgetting national celebrations and enjoying themselves on other days that are important to them personally. Discuss and give your opinion. (RE-WRITE)

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Nowadays people are forgetting national celebrations and enjoying themselves on other days that are important to them personally. Discuss and give your opinion. (RE-WRITE)

Celebrations, both national days and personal important days became an integral part of our tradition personal and social life. However, it is true that, people are now indulged more in celebrating personal events than national days. In this essay, I will explore the reasons of this trend.

To begin with, in this materialistic world, men has caught race with time. To attain more in less time some people are sacrificing or denying the important days of national events. Although these days are announced as public holidays, people are saving this leave for fulfilling their personal life demand...

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Good job, Tessy!

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chechi u didn write y people are much interested in personal celebrations. u could writ one para for y people dont participate in national celeb.. and another para for y they prefer for personal events..

hai Ashbin...

Welcome back Monu..

It is a tricky question...
It is not agree/disagree..
It is not discuss both sides...

If you want the essay which you think it already written. You can read it little bit back..the essay starting with the same sentance..

Read both the essay and comments.
Nice sentance..i will use it some where else...

Take care..

Tessaycheachy..

nowadays people spend huge chunk of money on certain personel events ranging from small bday party to lavish marriage ceremonies..