The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of citizens with an age about 65 years old and over. The figures cover a period of 100 years starting from 1940 in three nations.
Overall, is obviously the trends for all three countries start with a lower proportion and in the end, all percentages soared. Also, the growth rate, between 1940 and 2040, was erratic for Sweden and USA, but the ratio Japanese inhabitants aged 65 and over rocketed after 2025.
Particularly, the evolution of trends in Sweden and USA was parallel during of 40 years, but the percentage at the beginning was smaller for Swedish (7.5%) than Americans (9%). After 1980, in USA the proportion of population aged 65 and over decreased steadily until 2020 and then will rise gradually having a ratio of 23%, in 2040. In the case of Sweden the percentage fluctuated all the period reaching in 2040 at 25% of individuals with age about 65 years old and over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with age about 65 years old and over.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243093922652 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.0939226519337 0.116061578633 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0552486187845 0.0759168565197 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497237569061 0.0366838410393 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.17679558011 0.155750635184 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0276243093923 0.0379272487307 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5557717449 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110497237569 0.0948980150116 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00552486187845 0.00437022459523 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 933.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.9 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75925925926 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277777777778 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20987654321 0.247514529752 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172839506173 0.171178102325 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117283950617 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557717449 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 49.1373574646 49.3433353143 100% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1428571429 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2078707582 42.9750493124 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.0094962315 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 44.1305114638 47.7609492067 92% => OK
Elegance: 3.11538461538 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570268980541 0.418131533498 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167798870294 0.181151798455 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694620370633 0.0850326197045 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71633525015 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0445615068068 0.157042692854 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.331957525974 0.228904883108 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705214827304 0.108899403657 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355110294136 0.367819155151 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0906170557163 0.0812612215331 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.44459756533 0.316326947829 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502122895868 0.0921553760075 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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