It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use reasons and details to support your answer.
It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
As some of my neighbors may oppose with the construction of the new theater in a location, besides our residential; however, others may hold an opposite view and believe that is it necessary to have a movie theater in our neighborhood. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which gives adherence to my idea is that there is an undeniable demand for the entertainment center in our neighborhood. Unfortunately, our regain is located in the suburb, and it does not have the same facilities as in the center of a city. As a result, whenever I prefer to have same leisure times, I spend a huge amount of money for the transportation to get advantages of the other areas facilities. Moreover, beyond the expenses, I have the time problem too. Since the entertainment centers located far away from my dwelling, I do have to schedule a long span program to meet my request, which based on my hectic lifestyle, it barely happens.
The next fact embraced my outlook is that there will be an increment in cost of our houses. It is lucidly obvious that besides the fundamental features which determine the financial values of buildings, other facilities such as the accessibility to shopping malls, transportation hubs, and entertainment centers have a concrete influence on its ultimate cost. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-nine percent of the people in Iran prefer to have a house established next to the facility center; in addition, they prone to pay more money for this houses, in comparison to houses in the remote location. In this condition, a movie theater as an entertainment center has an indisputable impact on our dwelling monetary value.
The last indicator of my view's accuracy is that it expands my neighborhood. As it mentioned above, my resident is in the suburb with the restricted neighborhood. If a new theater movie center builds in here, it will appeal more people from the other region to my area. In this scenario, they will impel to buy a house in this area, in which has a decent sight-seeing and mild weather. Thus, it boosts the population in this quiet area. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the subject is the example of Rushdie region in our city which is located in the suburb and did have no popularity in the city; on the contrary, after a big shopping mall built there, this block gets known by everyone and now it is one of the crowded spots in our city.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the building of Movie Theater is a wise idea; inasmuch as, it furnishes better entertainment facility for us, it increases the financial status of our residents; besides, it expands our dwelling region with new people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 599, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ition, they prone to pay more money for this houses, in comparison to houses in the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239932885906 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.140939597315 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755033557047 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335570469799 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0822147651007 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124161073826 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0268456375839 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95482810557 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302013422819 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00167785234899 0.00188951952338 89% => OK
Determiners: 0.119127516779 0.0887237588012 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151006711409 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167785234899 0.0139019557991 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3133.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 536.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84514925373 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333955223881 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259328358209 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180970149254 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126865671642 0.112833075102 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95482810557 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488805970149 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 58.255905075 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3043478261 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2654368433 48.84282405 187% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.217391304 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3043478261 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 49.237183647 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.52287581699 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277408652212 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103162967982 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791582885935 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532621420695 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175914078088 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134128952809 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138178628578 0.0781384742642 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423430835673 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.145590310795 0.067059652881 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274683132688 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.314201421122 0.0618886996521 508% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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