Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward.
mention what they have done to help the community.
say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Mrs. Renu from Kandy from women development Organization. I went through your advertisement dated on 2nd March 2015. I am writing this letter with intention to inform about a person deserves for the reward mentioned in the advertisement.
My organization’ Director Mrs. Hemamali is the person I would like to suggest for this reward. She has been working for the widow women in the society more than last 30 years. She is a capable, experienced and talented woman suitable to receive this reward.
A woman knows another woman’s difficulties than a man. She utilizes her time for other needy women. Not only as organization’s Director, but also personally has she supported many widows and needy women, living in remote areas. By her talent of need identification and support them according to their requirements, she became a volunteer leader in the society. She never differentiates people as race, religion, disability and color. That is, she treats all as equally.
I would like to suggest a reward for this excellent lady; a trophy printed her name and her service for community. This should be an award for her life time achievement. Not only myself, but also many women who obtained supports through her would happy, if she receive this reward. We would be thanking if you could nominate Mrs. Hemamali also in your list.
Thank you
Sincerely,
M. M. Renu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... advertisement dated on 2nd March 2015. I am writing this letter with intention t...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...munity. This should be an award for her life time achievement. Not only myself, but also ...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'receives'.
Suggestion: receives
...upports through her would happy, if she receive this reward. We would be thanking if yo...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274725274725 0.220444632235 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.135531135531 0.167888034529 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0512820512821 0.0606518309736 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043956043956 0.0506257000042 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0989010989011 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102564102564 0.107062808482 96% => OK
Participles: 0.021978021978 0.041066498444 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03932393065 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018315018315 0.0385302599488 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0805860805861 0.0714148451538 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021978021978 0.0191574576366 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003663003663 0.00930345855455 39% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1416.0 1141.60824742 124% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.134020619 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05128205128 5.53046319177 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337606837607 0.284621296913 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239316239316 0.211203875043 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.133321485273 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106837606838 0.0843313296314 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03932393065 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 65.7800922914 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7647058824 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0694055057 44.7399317507 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7647058824 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.235294117647 0.613754768223 38% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 37.696329814 37.5504026743 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.43421052632 1.13073093955 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229218835783 0.331212695627 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104350163937 0.0927372745006 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0780625854478 0.0736520305886 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471103717391 0.579516596996 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107155409679 0.180689518051 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719637276436 0.122183219658 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870197045629 0.0765303033291 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231121420112 0.211926503985 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0397201749428 0.0737400523855 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16216825376 0.203819188451 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749913573682 0.067151250289 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.