tpo 3
The reading and the lecture are both about Rembrand, which is about genuine of his work. The author of the reading believes that there are some reasons that prove this art work is not himself. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that all reasons in the reading is true, but in fact, they find by the examination that it is indeed for Rembrandt.
First of all, the author claims that women in the painting wearing a fur collar with a ahite lien cap, and these two things are inconsistent. This point is challenged by the lecture. She says that this fur collar added by someone.
Secondly, the authors states that he was a expert in painting in light and shadow. He argues in this painting there is not any trace for this. This argument is rebutted by the lecture. She suggests probably somebody removed original light from this painting. She elaborates on this mentioning that original painting has light and shadow and it is realisitic.
Finally, the author mentions that this painting painted on the several pieces of wood glued together. So it is not realisitic. The lecture, on the other hand, feels that original painting was painted on one piece of wood and other pieces added when fur color added to painting.
- Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two and five) should not be allowed 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. 70
- TPO 4 86
- tpo7 86
- some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat prove this art work is not himself. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the painting wearing a fur collar with a ahite lien cap, and these two things ar...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...econdly, the authors states that he was a expert in painting in light and shadow....
^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in fact', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229508196721 0.261695866417 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.16393442623 0.158904122519 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0723426182421 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0368852459016 0.0435111971325 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0491803278689 0.0277247811725 177% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147540983607 0.128828473217 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0450819672131 0.0370669169778 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35562891885 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00409836065574 0.0208969081088 20% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.143442622951 0.128158765124 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016393442623 0.0114777025283 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1255.0 1645.83664459 76% => OK
No of words: 220.0 271.125827815 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70454545455 6.08160592843 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304545454545 0.374372842146 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231818181818 0.287516216867 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163636363636 0.187439937562 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0590909090909 0.113142543107 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35562891885 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513636363636 0.539623497131 95% => OK
Word variations: 46.3092665463 53.8517498576 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 21.7502111507 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8670886052 49.3711431718 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 132.220823453 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 21.7502111507 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.878197800319 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 37.8484848485 50.5018328374 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.68852459016 1.90840788429 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127128896324 0.142949733639 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861347441994 0.0787303798458 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564602034508 0.631733273073 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157355610431 0.139662658121 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344559101352 0.414875509568 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0481313253497 0.0530846634433 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.2958057395 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.