If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at lower salary or an experienced worker at higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Depending on personal experience, personality and management style of people choose different strategies. Some people hold the idea of hiring experienced workers at high salary meanwhile others support employing of inexperienced ones at low level income. I intensely keep up the later point of view because of some solid reasons. The bases of my reasons are personal and economical.
According to personal view, It is important to bear in mind that every experienced worker has been an inexperienced worker before. I personally, believe and trust the creativeness and bright minds of young people. They are more flexible than experienced ones in most fields and more intrigue to learn new skills, so they can easily adopt with changes in today’s competitive world. Besides, they have more enthusiasm to promote their skills and have more energy to challenge with problems. For example, in schools the young teachers are more energetic, have better interaction with children and convey the materials by more attractive methods. So, giving the opportunity to young people guarantees the success and future of a business.
Economically, employment of young and active work-force is a valuable investment for every business. Unfortunately, atmosphere of our country is discriminative one in the field of employing. Hence, the young ones have no chance for employment especially in little cities where privatization is not valuable. In consequence, we have a great rate of brain drain and migration of talents. It is a big loss for our country’s economy that loses the high educated force simply. If there is condition that we can attract and save our young work-force it will helps the families and country's economic situation. Therefore, the young- force is a significant wealth for economy and country.
To sum up, different people have different ideas when they encounter with this question and choose various options based on some factors like personality and management method. I personally, support the later idea of hiring young and inexperienced force because of personal and economical reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...t and save our young work-force it will helps the families and countrys economic situ...
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Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...perienced force because of personal and economical reasons. 30 min 356 words
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252659574468 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.130319148936 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.13829787234 0.0866891130778 160% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398936170213 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452127659574 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119680851064 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0265957446809 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03220549145 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0186170212766 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00531914893617 0.00188951952338 282% => OK
Determiners: 0.0718085106383 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00797872340426 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00797872340426 0.0139019557991 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2130.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 334.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37724550898 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40119760479 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314371257485 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24251497006 0.174417080927 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.179640718563 0.112833075102 159% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03220549145 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 65.0202685524 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.336796945 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.1371257485 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.85185185185 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177006915471 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104270483622 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861667550008 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50790930621 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0930161720576 0.151897553556 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062243466715 0.114077575197 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602859818185 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235630402372 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0364580451996 0.067059652881 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118675271322 0.210909579961 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447172309232 0.0618886996521 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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