Dear sir/madam,
Last Sunday i received email from your HR department that your organisation has selected me for the post of senior engineer for which i was interviewed. I take this as an opportunity to thank you for selecting me for such a crucial post in your esteemed company. However, my happiness lasted for few minutes as my memory reminded me about an important commitment on that date of joining.
This inability of me joining on prescribed date is because on the date of joining falls the date of my brother's marriage. I believe you will surely agree with me that tying Knot is the most important event in one's life. Surely me and my family won't like me to miss this ceremony. I sincerely believe that you will understand the position i am in and will provide me with some extra time to join. I assure that i will not disappoint you next time.
I shall be very thankful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear sir/madam, Last Sunday i received email from your HR department ...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r the post of senior engineer for which i was interviewed. I take this as an oppo...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ing Knot is the most important event in ones life. Surely me and my family wont like...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e that you will understand the position i am in and will provide me with some ext...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... some extra time to join. I assure that i will not disappoint you next time. I...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...i will not disappoint you next time. I shall be very thankful to you. Yours...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203389830508 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.175141242938 0.116061578633 151% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0621468926554 0.0759168565197 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0366838410393 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.141242937853 0.0131127313244 1077% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158192090395 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63911385634 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225988700565 0.0210936926555 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0734463276836 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282485875706 0.00437022459523 646% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00564971751412 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 923.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59393939394 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278787878788 0.337110787985 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230303030303 0.247514529752 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109090909091 0.112407865282 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63911385634 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.546246751206 112% => OK
Word variations: 55.6299668119 49.3433353143 113% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2769691826 42.9750493124 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 135.714022679 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.689975730869 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 39.5303030303 47.7609492067 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.140625 2.94281807926 39% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30578846317 0.418131533498 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162217019486 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107224613578 0.0850326197045 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578267060841 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178755179094 0.157042692854 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113458566258 0.228904883108 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656532112154 0.108899403657 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.167560172558 0.367819155151 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796988529628 0.0812612215331 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191073500781 0.316326947829 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624195985691 0.0921553760075 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.