The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required credits in education and educational psychology at the graduate level before being certified.
The Writer of this analytical piece has drawn optimistic conclusion from inarticulate and incomplete sets of data, that the problem of poorly trained teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future.
He begins with broad statement,based on that the argument is that improved the academic training, ensured by requiring credits in education and psychology,will substantially reduce the current problem of poorly trained teachers.This leaves lots of space for doubt.The question is that the credits in education will improve the teacher's classroom performance.It is not possible to number of required credits in education will complete the teacher's poor performance and to become a good teacher in future.It is also not mentioned that the current bad teachers haven't already met this standard training. But the writer has posies that if the teacher have complete the this standard training they become a good teacher in future,but this may not be enough to justify the optimistic conclusion the writer has jumped to the number of requiring credits in education will alleviate the problem of poorly trained teachers.
secondly,The writer is discuss in argument is teachers poor performance,but the writer is not justify the what kind of the poor teachers? and also not given the evidence of the poor teachers performance.Furthermore, the writer assumes that poorly performing teachers lack this standard training.It is not sure that the poorly trained teacher haven't a number of required credits in education.If the tasers have a trained credits and them performance is not still good.so, the writer not given the enough information to prove that the teacher's performance become a good in future.
Additionally, the writer also assume that, the number of required credits in education will given the good teacher in future.The writer is not argued the the poor performance in future will remove the teacher. In future,the teacher still teach in to the school if the the teacher's performance is not good.It is also required the behavior of teacher in school is humble and honest.these point is also not mention into the argument.
In general,it can be said that the writer has fail to make a convincing argument because of the complete absence of statistical data.No convincing reason is given.The argument ends with an entirely unjustified optimistic conclusion based on wishy-wishy observation that are likely to be incorrect.
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- The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required 50
- The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'in general', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238770685579 0.25644967241 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.177304964539 0.15541462614 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115839243499 0.0836205057962 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0756501182033 0.0520304965353 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00945626477541 0.0272364105082 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130023640662 0.125424944231 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0567375886525 0.0416121511921 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08564290167 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.026700313972 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.13475177305 0.113004496875 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189125295508 0.0255425247493 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.0127820249294 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2520.0 2731.13054187 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 446.07635468 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37974683544 6.12365571057 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.445569620253 0.378187486979 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.33164556962 0.287650121315 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227848101266 0.208842608468 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146835443038 0.135150697306 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08564290167 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 207.018472906 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40253164557 0.469332199767 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.2021754315 52.1807786196 81% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.039408867 40% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 49.375 23.2022227129 213% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 137.216013552 57.7814097925 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.0 141.986410481 222% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.375 23.2022227129 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.375 0.724660767414 190% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 3.58251231527 1200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 82.539556962 51.9672348444 159% => OK
Elegance: 1.62162162162 1.8405768891 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.634468930331 0.441005458295 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.408827879587 0.135418324435 302% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120375391935 0.0829849096947 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.913893163713 0.58762219726 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0707214920958 0.147661913831 48% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.430095500003 0.193483328276 222% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102202115253 0.0970749176394 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.591753470344 0.42659136922 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.188778572327 0.0774707102158 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.473377411882 0.312017818177 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120017016813 0.0698173142475 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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