The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required credits in education and educational psychology at the graduate level before being certified.
The Writer of this analytical piece has drawn optimistic conclusion from inarticulate and incomplete sets of data, that the problem of poorly trained teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future.
He begins with broad statement, based on that the argument is that improved the academic training, ensured by requiring credits in education and psychology, will substantially reduce the current problem of poorly trained teacher's. This leaves lots of space for doubt. The question is that the credits in education will improve the teacher's classroom performance. It is not possible to number of required credits in education will complete the teacher's poor performance and to become a good teacher in future. It is also not mentioned that the current bad teachers haven't already met this standard training. But the writer has posies that if the teacher have complete the this standard training they become a good teacher in the future, but this may not be enough to justified the optimistic conclusion the writer has jumped to the number of requiring credits in education will alleviate the problem of poorly trained teacher's.
Secondly, The writer is discussed in argument is teacher's poor performance, but the writer is not justify the what kind of the poor teacher's? and also not given the evidence of the poor teachers performance. Furthermore, the writer assumes that poorly performing teacher's lack this standard training. It is not sure that the poorly trained teacher havent a number of required credits in education. If the teachers have a trained credits and them performance is not still good. so, the writer not given the enough information to prove that the teacher's performance become a good in the future.
Additionally, the writer also assume that, the number of required credits in education will given the good teacher in future. The writer is not argued the the poor performance in future will remove the teacher. In future, the teacher can teach in to the school if the the teacher's performance is not good. It is also required the behavior of teacher in the school is humble and honest. these point is also not mention into the argument.
In general, it can be said that the writer has fail to make a convincing argument because of the complete absence of statistical data. No convincing reason is given. The argument ends with an entirely unjustified optimistic conclusion based on wishy-wishy observation that are likely to be incorrect.
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- The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required 50
- The problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. The state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...e credits in education will improve the teachers classroom performance. It is not possib...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...erformance and to become a good teacher in future. It is also not mentioned that the curr...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...mentioned that the current bad teachers havent already met this standard training. But...
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Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...osies that if the teacher have complete the this standard training they become a good te...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 891, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... credits in education will alleviate the problem of poorly trained teachers. S...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
...poor performance, but the writer is not justify the what kind of the poor teachers? and...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ify the what kind of the poor teachers? and also not given the evidence of the poor...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...also not given the evidence of the poor teachers performance. Furthermore, the writer as...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ot sure that the poorly trained teacher havent a number of required credits in educati...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...and them performance is not still good. so, the writer not given the enough inform...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...he enough information to prove that the teachers performance become a good in the future...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'give' or 'be given'?
Suggestion: give; be given
...r of required credits in education will given the good teacher in future. The writer ...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n education will given the good teacher in future. The writer is not argued the the poor ...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...her in future. The writer is not argued the the poor performance in future will remove ...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...her in future. The writer is not argued the the poor performance in future will remove ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ance in future will remove the teacher. In future, the teacher can teach in to the school...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e teacher can teach in to the school if the the teachers performance is not good. It is...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e teacher can teach in to the school if the the teachers performance is not good. It is...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...r can teach in to the school if the the teachers performance is not good. It is also req...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... required the behavior of teacher in the school is humble and honest. these point...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...er in the school is humble and honest. these point is also not mention into the argu...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vation that are likely to be incorrect.
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'in general', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227876106195 0.25644967241 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.163716814159 0.15541462614 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108407079646 0.0836205057962 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.070796460177 0.0520304965353 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176991150442 0.0272364105082 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.125424944231 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0530973451327 0.0416121511921 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7465750664 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199115044248 0.026700313972 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.146017699115 0.113004496875 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199115044248 0.0255425247493 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00663716814159 0.0127820249294 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2555.0 2731.13054187 94% => OK
No of words: 418.0 446.07635468 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11244019139 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416267942584 0.378187486979 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306220095694 0.287650121315 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205741626794 0.208842608468 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126794258373 0.135150697306 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7465750664 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 207.018472906 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375598086124 0.469332199767 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.1416068191 52.1807786196 77% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.039408867 105% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9047619048 23.2022227129 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1013081674 57.7814097925 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 141.986410481 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.2022227129 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.724660767414 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.58251231527 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.5267714741 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.60526315789 1.8405768891 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.637477494969 0.441005458295 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.206160418062 0.135418324435 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.140921952453 0.0829849096947 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633045457716 0.58762219726 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198002605126 0.147661913831 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.289075400521 0.193483328276 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152139309504 0.0970749176394 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.599513006259 0.42659136922 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.18780337643 0.0774707102158 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.47679431707 0.312017818177 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120000163078 0.0698173142475 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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