The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The chart below indicates changes in the amount of time spent in three diferent telephone call over 7 years from 1995 to 2002.
In terms of local – fixed line, in 1995, local – fixed line telephone call had the most popupar call in the UK, with around 72 billion minutes spent. This rate witnessed a significant rose and reached a peak of 90 billions minnute in 1990 before falling sharply to around 72 billion minnutes in the last year to become the highest of all.
When it comes to Mobiles phone call and National and international – fixed line. There were a up ward trend of the number of time spending in the UK. At the start of the period, around 38 billion minnutes of National and international – fixedline was spent. This figure increased steadily to 60 billion minnutes to become the second highest of all in 2002. While standing at much lower, the number of time of mobiles phone using was around 2 minnute (billions) in 1995. This rate grew gradually to around 46 minnute (billions) in the next 7 years.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The chart below indicates changes in the amount of time spent in three diferent telephone call over 7 years from 1995 to 2002.
Error: diferent Suggestion: different
Sentence: In terms of local ? fixed line, in 1995, local ? fixed line telephone call had the most popupar call in the UK, with around 72 billion minutes spent.
Error: popupar Suggestion: popular
Sentence: This rate witnessed a significant rose and reached a peak of 90 billions minnute in 1990 before falling sharply to around 72 billion minnutes in the last year to become the highest of all.
Error: minnute Suggestion: minute
Error: minnutes Suggestion: minutes
Sentence: At the start of the period, around 38 billion minnutes of National and international ? fixedline was spent.
Error: fixedline Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: minnutes Suggestion: minutes
Sentence: This figure increased steadily to 60 billion minnutes to become the second highest of all in 2002.
Error: minnutes Suggestion: minutes
Sentence: While standing at much lower, the number of time of mobiles phone using was around 2 minnute billions in 1995.
Error: minnute Suggestion: minute
Sentence: This rate grew gradually to around 46 minnute billions in the next 7 years.
Error: minnute Suggestion: minute
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 808 1000
No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.489 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.365 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.515 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262626262626 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.106060606061 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0808080808081 0.0759168565197 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0252525252525 0.0366838410393 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00505050505051 0.0131127313244 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.176767676768 0.155750635184 113% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0379272487307 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3519237591 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353535353535 0.0210936926555 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106060606061 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00505050505051 0.00967000014798 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1021.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54891304348 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309782608696 0.337110787985 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217391304348 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119565217391 0.171178102325 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.054347826087 0.112407865282 48% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.3519237591 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 47.159438779 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4444444444 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3959704729 42.9750493124 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 42.1835748792 47.7609492067 88% => OK
Elegance: 3.44444444444 2.94281807926 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507170395037 0.418131533498 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138539040316 0.181151798455 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732287044337 0.0850326197045 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613529552261 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191052617971 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263442458173 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131109092911 0.108899403657 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.450333685644 0.367819155151 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939505476587 0.0812612215331 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416821235101 0.316326947829 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457094239356 0.0921553760075 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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