Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
With the improvement and the advancement in our generation, how fortunate are we that we have the chance to get more knowledge and professional skills. Undoubtedly, some of us would become the leaders, and the other would need to follow the regulation. It’s true that the leader needs to listen the people’s voice and consider every possible policy which is good for the public. Sometimes, we may meet difficulty and the headman must decide immediately. However, I don’t totally agree that if the leader took the public advice quickly, the leader would have little accomplishment.
Admittedly, if the leader always changes his implementation when he gets the new popular opinion, we can’t see any achievement on him. For example, education is a contentious topic among people, government and experts. Because the world is changing all the time, the policy of education needs to have a faster pace to keep on it. However, we know that education is a long-term program, and we can’t see any different just in one or two years. What the students learn are the science, history and culture, and all of them need long time to cultivate. We have to be patient and wait for the ending result. It’s true that we can’t portend its consequence, however, we can confirm that it will fail if the leader easily sways by the popular views.
However, there would be specific situation that the leader needs the suggestions right away. For instance, when natural disaster occurs, the leader has to follow the public words, so the leader could give the proper and immediate help to the injuries. The leader should incorporate with people and foundations to resist the dangerous calamity.
Furthermore, popular opinion could give the leader hints and teach them how to work. We have to concede that all of us are not god, so we can’t prepare everything well all the time and so as the leader. Sometimes, he would be lost and can’t find the way. For instance, a technology company president exhausted his ideas and couldn’t invent any engaging products. What he need is to observe people and get some advices from them. The technology president has to design a fantastic device or solve the people’s problems effectively, so the public would buy his products. And time is changing, if the CEO did not follow the trend, he might lose the opportunity forever.
In conclusion, it is reasonable that the leader should take the public opinion to implement any programs or regulations, but the leaders have to have their own judgments and can’t revise their determination quickly. Without careful consideration, the leader would founder sooner or later.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196330275229 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.163302752294 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0605504587156 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0440366972477 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0623853211009 0.0444667217837 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0678899082569 0.12292977631 55% => OK
Participles: 0.00733944954128 0.0406280797675 18% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.87623127248 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293577981651 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111926605505 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0403669724771 0.0249443105267 162% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146788990826 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2696.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 442.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09954751131 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37556561086 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203619909502 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151583710407 0.132149295362 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87623127248 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518099547511 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 59.4181089778 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4166666667 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6839930651 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.674092028746 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 45.3397435897 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.00680272109 1.64882698954 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151385258868 0.391690518653 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0816710158907 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0390813748899 0.077325440228 51% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539383105242 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152763484087 0.149214159877 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687358709488 0.161403998019 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389617257735 0.0892212321368 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.475210370934 0.385218514788 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0726886914955 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11548763261 0.275328986314 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327692273477 0.0653680567796 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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