In my opinion e-mail of employees shouldn't be checked routinely.This would make them feel less loyal to the company and a hatred towards the company could get develop from these type of decisions taken by the management.
In general employee doesn't waste so much time in writing informal emails or mails which are not related to work. For example Emails are generally use to spread some information about some event, knowledge and many other things. Employee would anyway contact each other in informal way to spread some information not related to work. In the same manner this rule would also not help in protecting companies from lawsuits.
System capacity are more used in accessing heavy websites such as Youtube etc., Instead of monitoring the mail, restriction on these type of sites could be put on to make system more efficiently. SO there is no point in discussion about wasting time and resources through emails.
If a company want its employee to work more efficiently then they should create more friendly environment instead of making them feel like a slave. There is also a famous saying that "A person who has more restriction thinks of flying more heights". An employee should always feel that everyday some positive thing is added into his personality because of the company and that could be done by being more transparent inside the company so that one could learn from another. Company should actually invest their time and human power thinking about all these problems instead of wasting time in making silly rules.
In last it could be concluded that employee could develop a hatred towards the company after imposing bad rules on them which would lead to make system less efficient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... time and resources through emails. If a company want its employee to work mor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'anyway', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in general', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218241042345 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.179153094463 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944625407166 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.071661237785 0.0497285424764 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0293159609121 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14332247557 0.12292977631 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0684039087948 0.0406280797675 168% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49682913 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260586319218 0.030933414821 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0846905537459 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.042345276873 0.0249443105267 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00977198697068 0.0148568991511 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1726.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 286.0 452.878318584 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03496503497 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36013986014 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255244755245 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15034965035 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0874125874126 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49682913 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 60.3072347199 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8333333333 23.380412469 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.182491456 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.380412469 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 49.3578088578 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.53488372093 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31576158391 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954304379005 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0784628473139 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61742843793 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205964037243 0.149214159877 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114672820006 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718655351872 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.180369404255 0.385218514788 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0484768525345 0.0692045440612 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180054662411 0.275328986314 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642991251821 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.