Should a city preserve or destroy its historic building?
History is a profound debate, including whatever had been occurred for the civilizations over the past million centuries. Nowadays, a plethora of people is in conviction that protection of old buildings is one of the primary duties of each government. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that historic constructions belong to the past and there is no need to be preserved. I am of the opinion that all of the choices have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, history is an integral part of each society as it plays crucial role to form the current societies. Indeed, without the previous occurrences, people live in completely varied circumstance. Therefore, buildings as the symbols of each epoch are able to convey numerous facts related to that period of time, and that is why no one can overlook the high value of these debris. For example, the type of governors or the religion of that era of time. For instance, the ancient Rome or Greek are very famous and the tourists from all over the world travel to Italy and Greek to visit these spectacular sites.
Another significant issue which should be taken into consideration is the architecture of these old buildings which talk about the arts and culture of that time. This issue is far more قابل توجه notified in historical countries such as Iran. For instance, the well-known ancient civilization of Iran, Hakamanesh, built admirable constructions - Takht Jamshid. Iranian is still proud of their empire due to his power and logic and peace. Although most of the construction had been destroyed, the remains is enough for distinguishing Old Iran from many previous countries.
On the basis of the aforementioned above, I am convinced that looking after the historic buildings brings variety of advantages for human. Since people not only get familiar with the events that had happened on that period, but also get aware of the art and culture of the people who lived there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... be preserved. I am of the opinion that all of the choices have their own merits and drawb...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o convey numerous facts related to that period of time, and that is why no one can overlook th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecture of these old buildings which talk about the arts and culture of that time....
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248663101604 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.133689839572 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101604278075 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0347593582888 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0160427807487 0.0685040099705 23% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.141711229947 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0347593582888 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84906378571 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024064171123 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133689839572 0.0887237588012 151% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00802139037433 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187165775401 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2060.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 341.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04105571848 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343108504399 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278592375367 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196480938416 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131964809384 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84906378571 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592375366569 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 67.8281203434 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3125 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2237659771 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.1717375367 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.30434782609 1.45489161554 158% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0219792800402 0.300154397459 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0765960499559 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547872417566 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540563923848 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144479473738 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0105736596506 0.114077575197 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0158009297539 0.0781384742642 20% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.43290316557 0.336927656856 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0947107697515 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016996001364 0.210909579961 8% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00351698073478 0.0618886996521 6% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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