You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I'm pretty excited on the thought of studying abroad. I will be exposed to a completely new country where I have not been before. Hence it is sure to consist of many surprises and shocks. I will certainly like many of things in my stay during my study abroad period. The country which I'm planning to opt for my higher studies is The United States of America. It is one of the developed nations in the world and is sure to give me a wonderful study experience. But I will sometimes dislike some of the aspects that I may find in this country.
First of all, I will surely l...
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