Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A leader leads the masses to achieve a set goal. He gives them a direction to work to accomplish the aim. For this he may have to face many challenges, he might even lose the support of majority. But whether a leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little or not is a debatable issue. Scrupulous analysis need to be done to take a stand. We are pretty much aware of the failure of the Indian National Congress in the mainland of India in recent elections of 2014. One of the major reasons as identified by the political critics is the ignorance to the need for change, change in the laws, change in the set standards, change in the working system, change in the ideology of the leaders itself. The leaders, Sonia Gandhi and the fellow Congressmen were ignorant to the changing opinions of the society and eventually led to the collapse of the political party.
On the other hand, the new government, led by current Prime Minister Narendra Modi understood the need for this change and highly influenced by popular opinion formulated new laws. His government is also making efforts to modify the old laws to suit the current scenario. And although the government just came into power, it already has more than half the Indians, in India and abroad, in its favor. One man has brought about a revolution in the country. There’s no doubt that this one leader has accomplished so much in so less a time. Highly influenced by popular opinion and motivated by the need for change, Narendra Modi has set an example to leaders all around the world.
Consequently, leaders today who are influenced by popular opinions definitely make it big. They just need to identify the areas that are in dire need for a change.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'no doubt', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237980769231 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.151442307692 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0649038461538 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528846153846 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432692307692 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117788461538 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0408653846154 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59203860002 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336538461538 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129807692308 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168269230769 0.0249443105267 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2201.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 381.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77690288714 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351706036745 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262467191601 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162729658793 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10498687664 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59203860002 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522309711286 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 57.2959638409 55.4138127331 103% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0526315789 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.708457509 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.842105263 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 46.2993507391 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.60194174757 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274199664443 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133096888506 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.121042390539 0.077325440228 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514688847133 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184421484328 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148009969116 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.251600616782 0.0892212321368 282% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378325413632 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109787021828 0.0692045440612 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209179646519 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086593907733 0.0653680567796 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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