Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Which do you prefer?
In today's hectic world, it’s very common for people to judge a person by external appearance, because I is easy, direct and instinctive. Appearance is a very important aspect of a person and reflects one's personalities. Some people are inclined towards the opinion that we can trust people and judge them just by first glance. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that judge a person's characters quickly by first glance will be wrong. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, although you can tell the person's characteristics from his appearance, you cannot tell exactly what the person is like. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that by and large, it is established beyond doubt that first impressions are often wrong because nowadays people present in society with different style of clothing and appearance. Scientifically speaking, we all know that different types of clothes are designed in various forms and shapes and people regardless of their age wear clothe with different colors and style. Indeed, these clothes have unique meaning and people put them on in different places. But most of the time people judge a person based on his/her appearance and by first glance they may make a mistake about their personalities. Actually, internal characteristics should take into consideration in order to judge properly. Delving further into the issue reveal that although people may guess something about characteristics, judge based on external appearance and emotion will overwhelmed us with a sense of shame. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that vast majorities of people who judge based on impression suffer from paucity of knowledge and self-esteem because every human being know that in today's hectic city no one are able to predict something right about other.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that myriads of people just pretend that they have some qualities that in reality they do not have. Broadly speaking, some people due to the lack of self-confidence want to show off in public and present in society in a way that crowds of people by first glance will recognized them as a complete man. In this case, people need to think deeply and judge them based on their internal characters. To put it in other word, appearance of people can be misleading and not until people judge them wisely can they known them as areal man. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, clothes which people wear in a society are made in a way that every human being can realize what characters a person have. In fact, those appearance give an insight to people to identify others through their impression and first glance. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, judge a person through his/her external appearance is not an ideal recognition. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that judgment based on appearance and what people wear can be highly misleading. In addition, people may pretend in a way that their characteristics are qualified. In this way, people should judge them thoroughly and not to believe something through their appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...portant aspect of a person and reflects ones personalities. Some people are inclined...
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Line 3, column 917, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'overwhelm'
Suggestion: overwhelm
...on external appearance and emotion will overwhelmed us with a sense of shame. A noteworthy ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'recognize'
Suggestion: recognize
...t crowds of people by first glance will recognized them as a complete man. In this case, p...
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Line 5, column 859, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this appearance' or 'those appearances'?
Suggestion: this appearance; those appearances
...what characters a person have. In fact, those appearance give an insight to people to identify o...
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Line 7, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eve something through their appearance.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'by and large', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234920634921 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.152380952381 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0888888888889 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603174603175 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0396825396825 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90660615374 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253968253968 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0031746031746 0.00188951952338 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746031746032 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0269841269841 0.0209618222197 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126984126984 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3535.0 2387.08602151 148% => OK
No of words: 572.0 408.028673835 140% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18006993007 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386363636364 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18006993007 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136363636364 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90660615374 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465034965035 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7649674456 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.88 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5169621108 48.84282405 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.88 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 49.8030769231 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.55621301775 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21595383957 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106849976336 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614491762992 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453958859812 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12132887024 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785825121329 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492282448329 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490125737967 0.336927656856 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0315905855339 0.067059652881 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152929183088 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00992729605473 0.0618886996521 16% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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