Technology is the need of the hour for every nation which is either developed or in the phase of development. As to every reaction there is an equal and opposite reaction so along with the advancements is the repercussions which makes certain traditional skills die out. Some people opine the fact that there is no point in keeping them in place. However, I believe that the basic fundamental part of the skills should be kept intact.
Due to the evolution of the computer and progressive use of internet, everything we buy and use in our life has become technology based using artificial intelligence. For instance, clothes which were hand weaved in the past and organised by the workers are now processed by machines. The house hold items which were earlier made out of clay have been replaced by the plastics developed in factories which involves very less human effort. This has resulted in loss of work for several sections of society which were indulged in such activities for their living. To add on, Handloom and textile sector which was the backbone of the country like India is now in dire straits.
On the contrary, Customary tradition requires lot of skills , time and work force. As these traits are becoming obsolete and younger generation is more influenced by newer trends hence, it requires more attention from its limited users as well as support from government for sustaining dying arts.
To conclude, I would say that the advantages of technology outweigh traditional skills.But at the same point, it is high time when certain measures should be taken to preserve skill sets so that the persons still involved in these should not feel left behind. Steps should be made to train them to use technology as well so that could compete in global scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
... technology outweigh traditional skills.But at the same point, it is high time when...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'as well as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990712074303 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495356037152 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030959752322 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148606811146 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0588235294118 0.0403226058552 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62241830373 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216718266254 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00163938923432 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.0928792569659 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185758513932 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247678018576 0.011925033212 208% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1781.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89735099338 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324503311258 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258278145695 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192052980132 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119205298013 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62241830373 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.8488360502 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2307692308 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0185447132 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.0585838003 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.72289156627 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304335365013 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118736907444 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592268798593 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600191898123 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123770422145 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12654590389 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061280447271 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.222789664622 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.146123002317 0.0638462369009 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190367596348 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047367186053 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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