In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people
An art is a piece of work of artists, through which they try to show their understanding of a theme or topic through a physical and visual form.They have various forms of arts like film,novel,poem,song,paintings and many more.
It needs to be understood by the viewers so that they can get the main gist of the art.
For many artists the primary objective is to create a art which has deep meaning and promotes freedom of expression.
For them money is secondary.Great artists like Pablo Picasso & Leonardo Da Vinci focussed on creating great art,which we can see by the time pieces they have created and is now appreciated worldwide.Had they been driven by money and make it,their names might not have been their on the history.
Nowadays,its getting even difficult for an artist to survive only based on creativity because of the money driven world we currently live in.Some artists have to compromise on their creativity and the complex form of art which might not be understandable by common people.In this field they are creating art which is customer centric and easily understood by them.And,the film industry is a perfect example of this.We can see that the quality of films are declining year by year as they are driven by money mindedness.But their are great directors like Christopher Nolan,who are making beautiful,creative films and also they try to make it understandable by common people.Film like these should be the ideal way of creation as they are trying to convey a great idea and also making the viewer curious.
Arts like painting are more complex and difficult to understand by common people.Its also difficult to convey the idea of an art by words of mouth, and also alters the interpretation of the art.
Its whole purpose and the time,money and effort spent will not be able to fruitify and convey to greater masses but well understood and appreciated by a few.
Also, in case of novels,Self help books are meant to provide guidance and must be understandable,while on the other hand fiction novels can be complex or easy,based on the author's choice and creativity.
Therefore,it is an artists choice in their respective field,in which one has to chose between popularity or merit.If he wants to convey a complex art form,then he must be ready that only a few will be able to appreciate it and one might or might not paid for it.On the other hand,if one wants to make a popular film,song then he can make it more understandable and less complex and get financially rewarded.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228511530398 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.171907756813 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100628930818 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0482180293501 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587002096436 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117400419287 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0461215932914 0.0406280797675 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17257352266 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335429769392 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733752620545 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0293501048218 0.0249443105267 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146750524109 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2514.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88758782201 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302107728337 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23887587822 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156908665105 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114754098361 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17257352266 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480093676815 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.9651409104 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.4444444444 23.380412469 203% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 206.654360446 59.4972553346 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.333333333 141.124799967 198% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4444444444 23.380412469 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.674092028746 181% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.94800884956 182% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 71.3320322665 51.4728631049 139% => OK
Elegance: 1.40601503759 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303243147855 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.214769885582 0.123202303941 174% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119674962614 0.077325440228 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.16191656018e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16008839441 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064167194918 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253300325119 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117862715762 0.0692045440612 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16008839441 0.275328986314 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064167194918 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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