Some people believe that corporal punishment will spoil the children. While others believe that, it is the best method of teaching discipline to children. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The way how small children should be dealt with and the approach that should be adopted by their parents for punishing them remains an arguable and controversial matter that always opens the door for a lot of discussions and debates. Some people think that the corporal punishment could sometimes be a good solution to control their children and quash dreadful acts that could be perpetrated by a child. Some others, on the contrary think that it might be harmful and devastating to the personality of the child especially on the long term.

One point of view that might be quite prevalent nowaday...

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