Who wants to be alone and isolated? Everyone wants to have more and more friends. Friend is the important character in person life but depends on the deepness in the friendship. Agreeing to the statement that always keep your old friends than to make new friends. Contrasting to the term, old friend, what this term signifies? There is no equipment to judge the oldness of the friendship. Friends who were there in your past are old friends. People move away from their friend due to change in the direction of the life but best friends will always intact with your hearts. Old friend are the ones who has supported you in your growth.
In the rush of earning money and moving ahead, people don't give time to your old friends but it does not mean that they are not there in your life. They will be always there in your heart. It is human tendency to interact with the new people and show friendship attribute towards them. Some are making new friend for the sake of doing work with them. You can't share private or personal things with everyone but in your friend circle some one will be there to listen these things from you. He/she will always act like a brother born from the other mother. There is always different feeling when you are meeting your old buddies. Great example of friendship is between Lord Krishna and Sudhama. Lord Krishna had greeted his childhood friend in a unique manner after a long time.
In today's era, many are running for their selfishness, they are thinking past as a past. There is no need to recall and be in contact with your old mates for them. Who will like to remember these types of people? Don't forget that old friend were new at particular time. There are lot of examples of relationship which has been broken by old friend only. Some new friends show the reality of the friendship and gain the actual trust on you.
Finally, it is concluded that old friends are more reliable in compare to the new friends because there are lots of memories attached and have different level of trust. We can't predict the mind of the person, how will it change and when will it deviate,who knows? It always depend on the attribute of the friend and his/her behavior towards you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... earning money and moving ahead, people dont give time to your old friends but it do...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r the sake of doing work with them. You cant share private or personal things with e...
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Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...with everyone but in your friend circle some one will be there to listen these things fr...
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Line 2, column 739, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a unique manner" with adverb for "unique"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rishna had greeted his childhood friend in a unique manner after a long time. In todays era, many...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...like to remember these types of people? Dont forget that old friend were new at part...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d and have different level of trust. We cant predict the mind of the person, how wil...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
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Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...en will it deviate,who knows? It always depend on the attribute of the friend and his/...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224018475751 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.168591224018 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900692840647 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415704387991 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0762124711316 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117782909931 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0392609699769 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.20181104543 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0300230946882 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0785219399538 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161662817552 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0277136258661 0.0139019557991 199% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2205.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55415617128 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299748110831 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196473551637 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110831234257 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0604534005038 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20181104543 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471032745592 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.4968879376 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7037037037 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2171558384 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 120.699889404 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7037037037 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.148148148148 0.644075263715 23% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 34.3510588674 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.33064516129 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363288029193 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104931471239 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0754529967016 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.418572157976 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123489394633 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130643913045 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093092117397 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.452168053173 0.336927656856 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0466275192028 0.067059652881 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269841313466 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681432874804 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8870967742 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.