One of the most significant characteristics of all human beings is trying to be better and better. So, all people want to have better things and as a result experience a better life. Moreover, people enjoy trying different things in their life period and because of being mortal, they work hard and try to approach this goal as soon as possible. I completely agree with the statement in above question and I believe that this is merit of human beings.
First, you can see a lot of rich people who are trying to improve their life and their financial level. However, they have a good life in others’ point of view, they are never satisfied with what they have; and, they always want something more. It’s good of people not stopping improving their life, because this characteristic helps people to never lose their hope and also make life more sophisticated.
What’s more, if we ourselves feel that our today’s life is as same as past, we’ll regret ourselves of not trying to make it better or make a little difference. Because of this fact, we always try to do our bests to proceed in our lives.
Last but not least, I am of the opinion that if people reach a day that feel they are satisfied and there isn’t any challenging things, that day would be the last day of his/her life. This specification of people keep them alive and this make a life more loveable.
In conclusion, I believe all people should do their best to have more and try to make a difference in their lives and they should never be satisfied with their life and what they have.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.172205438066 0.229887763892 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.175226586103 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0966767371601 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0664652567976 0.046263068375 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0906344410876 0.0685040099705 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0966767371601 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0271903323263 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59163685797 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302114803625 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0694864048338 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012084592145 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151057401813 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1588.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 281.0 408.028673835 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6512455516 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277580071174 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167259786477 0.251872472559 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120996441281 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106761565836 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59163685797 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494661921708 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.9292993642 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4166666667 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7880731257 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 40.1426453144 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 0.890909090909 1.45489161554 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24927885965 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130225264878 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.088932026819 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.6465120483 0.497263757937 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156719207449 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110850935083 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941703171582 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.208005994523 0.336927656856 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0675193896525 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155496829694 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718967358857 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.