In the technological advance era, many people especially professional people try to use the internet even though in a small village. Personally, I have to use internet connection every day in order to research information, talk with my boss as chatting and sending lots of emails and I want to strongly support my reasons as I mentioned above.
I am a visitor and I need to every day or sometimes several times during the day search for new brands and new products. Every day I become update by using the internet because by searching new information and knowledge we try to improve the quality of products. Moreover, by searching information I can promote my knowledge in another way.
My company located out of my city and I have to connect every day by my boss as chatting. Every day for being updates I have to give lots of information about new brands, products, other companies to my boss. For example, one of the foreign company needed lots of goods but by high quality, after that, I had the interview online with company's boss and fortunately I could sell two million dollars. Additionally, chatting by the internet definitely help to solve our problem and making more advantages.
Every day by using the internet I send lots of emails to my colleagues and other customers. It is the best way spending less money to ask and answer questions.When I want to sell our product, I have to send an email about two or three hundred times to Company and customer. However, sometimes the internet connection has a problem and I have to connect to customers by cell phone but most of the time it is easy to use the internet.
In conclusion as above reasons, internet is a best way in order to talk, research and sending an email. Consequently, using internet by paying less money help people to do their work and by spending little time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to everyday'?
Suggestion: to everyday
...ned above. I am a visitor and I need to every day or sometimes several times during the d...
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Line 8, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
... less money to ask and answer questions.When I want to sell our product, I have to s...
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Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...n I want to sell our product, I have to send an email about two or three hundred times to Com...
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Line 10, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...onclusion as above reasons, internet is a best way in order to talk, research and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265536723164 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.149717514124 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0706214689266 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310734463277 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0819209039548 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11581920904 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0395480225989 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7817426746 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0564971751412 0.0309702414327 182% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0762711864407 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00564971751412 0.0209618222197 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1849.0 2387.08602151 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68923076923 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316923076923 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258461538462 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181538461538 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110769230769 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7817426746 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483076923077 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.8128006123 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2142857143 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2395182937 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.071428571 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.0604395604 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.60215053763 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269070599168 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152904429578 0.103427244359 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.072032950011 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618010799427 0.497263757937 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118585643703 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122250811925 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473232871543 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361869572348 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687252281267 0.067059652881 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184542889628 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496771433591 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.