To success in life so many things are important like education, communication skill, organising the group in the company and relate well to people. It is very difficult to say one is much better than other because it kind of close net work to function very well. So, both the ability to relate themselves in given environment and educational qualification are very crucial.
To begin with, in order function properly all of organ has to work efficiently. For example, heart regulate the circulatory system, kidney filter waste products, brain control the motor and sensory system. If all these systems works well, then only human can function properly or else we cannot survive. Like that both study hard and relate the subjects what you studied in student life is very crucial to get the job in future.
For example, one of my friends, he very good in studying all subjects, if you ask anything which related to the subject. He explains every well manner in theory point of view, but he has the problem in relating that subjects to practical implementations. That is reason he would not score marks good with external examiners that leads poor grading in overall performance, Further, he could not find out right job for him.
Another one of friends, he is vary talent in relating the subject into practical manner but his problems he wont studies much harder than others. Because of that he used to very less score in the theory part that makes him poor grade in overall performance because of his weakness study. He also would not find the good job for him. where as one more friend he has these two qualities and he selected in campus interview conducted by GE company. That is am i right?
Finally, when both the abilities are comes together people can makes lot of difference in their carrier. So the both the study hard and relate well are likes our two eyes. In order to see the world perfectly in three dimensions view we need both eyes. like that above mentioned qualities are importants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ent life is very crucial to get the job in future. For example, one of my friends, ...
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Suggestion: varied
...him. Another one of friends, he is vary talent in relating the subject into pra...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun score is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...others. Because of that he used to very less score in the theory part that makes him...
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Suggestion: Where
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Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...iew conducted by GE company. That is am i right? Finally, when both the abili...
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... in their carrier. So the both the study hard and relate well are likes our two ...
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...the both the study hard and relate well are likes our two eyes. In order to see ...
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Suggestion: Like
...ree dimensions view we need both eyes. like that above mentioned qualities are imp...
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...eed both eyes. like that above mentioned qualities are importants.
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...ve mentioned qualities are importants.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'kind of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2265625 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.138020833333 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.078125 0.046263068375 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0677083333333 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119791666667 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0182291666667 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50983499465 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03125 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00260416666667 0.00188951952338 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.0807291666667 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015625 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015625 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2027.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82471264368 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301724137931 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238505747126 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50983499465 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 63.6120821136 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3157894737 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0576402117 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.684210526 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.1663641863 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.28440366972 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370855197618 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079682211271 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0648931129515 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509011137972 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127220730697 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136761511344 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868768588367 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343845161043 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.138964445759 0.067059652881 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244652281418 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724408131468 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.