Our entire education system is based on what we accumulate each day of our life. In spite of the fact that school teachers are those who give us lots of information in a variety of fields, our parents are still the best teachers; they start their educational process as soon as we were born and never stop teaching us.
In the initial years of our life, our parents are involved in guiding us, in modulating our personality and making us understand the differences between right and wrong. When I was five, my parents bought me a dog; they taught me how to take care of him, feed him, play with him and bath him. Thus, I learned that we all have responsibilities.
Even if parents are not specialized in education, their role in teaching the children to be aware of the need of improving their knowledge at school is tremendous. Our parents are not supposed to teach us Math, Chemistry or Biology, but they are very much involved in giving us lessons about being independent, strong and confident in ourselves. As my mother said to me, "fight your own battles because I will not be always able to protect you."
Teenagers have to be informed about all the negative effects that can occur if using drugs, drinking alcohol, or smoking. Regarding this issue, parents have to cooperate with school teachers to make children aware of those possible risks.
I believe that parents are the best teachers because their lessons last forever. My parents are old now. Even when I am a grown up person, I consider that they can still give me very good advices when I need them, based on their life experience. My parents have the most important role in my education during my life and I will always be grateful for everything they have taught me.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195965417867 0.261695866417 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.184438040346 0.158904122519 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0605187319885 0.0723426182421 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576368876081 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.149855907781 0.0277247811725 541% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112391930836 0.128828473217 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0576368876081 0.0370669169778 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59553785349 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230547550432 0.0208969081088 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0489913544669 0.128158765124 38% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115273775216 0.0158828679856 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201729106628 0.0114777025283 176% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1757.0 1645.83664459 107% => OK
No of words: 309.0 271.125827815 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68608414239 6.08160592843 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300970873786 0.374372842146 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239482200647 0.287516216867 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155339805825 0.187439937562 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906148867314 0.113142543107 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59553785349 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.92906426 53.8517498576 109% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7692307692 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3791612906 49.3711431718 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 132.220823453 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.878197800319 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 47.717450834 50.5018328374 94% => OK
Elegance: 0.933823529412 1.90840788429 49% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320442409868 0.549887131256 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094255650643 0.142949733639 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0857688309759 0.0787303798458 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53923989979 0.631733273073 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153771155715 0.139662658121 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125958342597 0.266732575781 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754736556279 0.103435571967 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.226420369283 0.414875509568 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0727989716506 0.0530846634433 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203669489741 0.40443939384 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379000414205 0.0528353158467 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 10.2958057395 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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