Yes, I agree the statement which say the politician or the leader must have very good communication skills. To support my argument I want to explore some real events which is happening around the world today.
To begin with, the american president Barack Obama is very good speaker and he has lots of communication skills that reason he could became president of US. When, we look back the american history, 150 years before itself black people got the freedom from the slavery issues but still that time on wards there was no black president in america but he became first African- American in the world history it happent because he is very good in communication skills that attract the entire american to elect him as president. Further, he was professor that helps in speaking capability which gave good chance for him for this position.
Moreover, this skill gives tackle the harsh situations. For example, when Obama was elected as president in 1998 that time arresting of Pin Laden became controversial that time because that american are against in the foreign countries and he tackled the situation with help of NATO that arrested the Pin laden without any consequences. That, happens all because of his communication skill.
Again, Obama tackled many difficult situation in peaceful way while was in presidential office. He was not great body personality or he did not use any army power to run his office very well, he got success in his leadership because of the communication skill nothing more than that.
Further, it reduces the panic situations. For example, when there was huge economic crisis occur in 2007 that time Obama comfort the people with his speech and he made the economy back to the original position. Before that time Bush was president he was a warrior in the second world war but he does not have that much communication skills that reasons he could not won in the election.
Finally, this communication skill protect them in negative situation. For example, when Bill Clinton was president he got up white scandal problem during that time the Marrison claimed that he is black president but he took it in positive way that he in favour of blacks but actually, she criticised for his action and she not rewarded him, but still because of communication talent he was able to modify the negative statements into positive ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...mmunication skills that reason he could became president of US. When, we look back the...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'win'
Suggestion: win
...cation skills that reasons he could not won in the election. Finally, this commu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272093023256 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.13023255814 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837209302326 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441860465116 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0860465116279 0.0685040099705 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132558139535 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0046511627907 0.0351676179071 13% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60690184154 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162790697674 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.00232558139535 0.00188951952338 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860465116279 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00697674418605 0.0209618222197 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255813953488 0.0139019557991 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2370.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 399.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93984962406 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335839598997 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25313283208 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165413533835 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102756892231 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60690184154 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513784461153 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.8011396139 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 26.6 20.5533526081 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.643182079 48.84282405 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.5533526081 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.913283208 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.57142857143 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214332588844 0.300154397459 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940852835558 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717336959374 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607410157181 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.220669674834 0.151897553556 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101079279762 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812390119477 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342755847542 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0745787574277 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155293574823 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825446168897 0.0618886996521 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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