In order for any work of art like a film or a novel or a poem or a song to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
"An art could be perceived in infinite many ways"
Before delving into the topic let us make an attempt to understand the word "art". Art is anything that is created with an imagination and skills to express any ideology. As proposed to the given statement, i am in partial disagreement.
Art cannot be confined as the feelings of artists which they transforms into master pieces in order to convey their thoughts are bottomless. Paintings of Picasso, literature of Shakespeare are the examples of art which were abstruse but yet they are regarded as top-top epitome in contrast to the authors assertion. Moreover, understanding an abstract painting, music or a poem one just needs to feel its essence, thus comprehensibility is not the only parameter over which an art has to be evaluated.
However, ability to fathom does not play a huge role for an art to gain praise. There can be several ways an individual adapt or make an attempt to understand the geography behind the art. To illustrate, a person with German origin would prefer watching any movie or play in German language. Thus, if an art is understandable, its a plus as it amplifies the feelings attached to it.
To bolsters the statement, as an art is a thought an idea one expresses. Its comprehensibility doesn't play a massive role to have merit, but it is always positive when it is comprehendible.
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| 2016-09-05 | tarandeep22ss | 70 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240740740741 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.181481481481 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.062962962963 0.0880659088768 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407407407407 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0407407407407 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0851851851852 0.12292977631 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0407407407407 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18914533465 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0518518518519 0.030933414821 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148148148148 0.0249443105267 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0148568991511 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1395.0 2732.02544248 51% => OK
No of words: 234.0 452.878318584 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96153846154 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.58838876751 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350427350427 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282051282051 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217948717949 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132478632479 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18914533465 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.48968727796 125% => OK
Word variations: 63.1187280037 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6512181783 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 47.7051282051 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.39436619718 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297150510043 0.391690518653 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0950801666145 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0779535338073 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605936919575 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140239738763 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12824897941 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350376015325 0.0892212321368 39% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290814013382 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0620975515926 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170169193852 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729429497778 0.0653680567796 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.