Plants are obviously a wonderful gift from God, They exhibit an extraordnary benifits to which we are tremendosly grateful. When I think of my country Palestine, the only plant that passes my mind is the Olive tree. Olive trees in my country are ubiquitous everywhere; on farms,around homes,in the streets and on the pavements. They are definitely important for the Palestenian people for many aspects.
First of all, from an economical point of view, olive trees are the major commercial crop for Palestine. Many families depends on them for their livelihood. olives, olive oil, olive wood and ol...
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Sentence: Moreover, olive trees promote a cultural value for the Palestinians where during the harvest season, all family members; grandparents, parents, and children go to the hills and valleys where their olive trees are abundunt, and work in olive picking all day.
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Sentence: Relatives and friends would also come and help, where they all spend a joyous time togother.
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