In the age of the science and technology, people are attracting towards the inventions and discoveries. Who is the inventor of latest technologies? Obviously man, man has used his creative minds to invent technologies. Children become more creative and interested in the era of modern technologies. Thinking of the children have been changed and it is propagating towards the creativity. Showing disagreement to the statement that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Instead of making less creative, technology has opened the cores of the children's mind to think more and better. Technology has provided proper direction and guidance to the children so that they can think towards the further enhancement of the inventions.
Today's time is the fact that science has developed a particular level and still climbing the stairs to enhance its fields. Technology has created lot of questions in the mind of the children to think about a particular invention. Children's minds are always in the search to know about a gadget that how it works? What is the use and salient features? Why this? Nowadays a year old child seems more interest towards cellphones and other electronic gadgets in compare to traditional toys. Do you think that technology will take dip in the future? It is obviously no because today's children will show creativity in the enhancement and development of the technology which depicts that they are becoming more creative and interested. Which is more attractive? Car with fully equipped with technology or normal car. These inventions create interest of the children towards technology.
Children were creative in the past also but they had limited options to show the creativity. Their reach was limited without the technology. They have invented number of games from the scrap material. There were no cellphones and cars to think more creative in the field of technology.
Technology has created more awareness and interest in the minds of the children. Thinking has been changed towards different field and these children will show their creativity in the upcoming future.
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- TOEFL T P O 5 Integrated Writing Task 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ns and discoveries. Who is the inventor of latest technologies? Obviously man, man has us...
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Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...take dip in the future? It is obviously no because todays children will show creat...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity. Their reach was limited without the technology. They have invented number of...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...technology. They have invented number of games from the scrap material. There wer...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256756756757 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.178378378378 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837837837838 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351351351351 0.046263068375 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0351351351351 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121621621622 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0567567567568 0.0351676179071 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84256397761 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110810810811 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108108108108 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189189189189 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2130.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22807017544 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377192982456 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.324561403509 0.251872472559 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239766081871 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154970760234 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84256397761 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.1829946545 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.68 20.5533526081 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5987771827 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.68 20.5533526081 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.644075263715 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.1361403509 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.75 1.45489161554 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394549117643 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109509525488 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0790348647152 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48216714231 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187744044869 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156196563164 0.114077575197 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959905094957 0.0781384742642 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490808925851 0.336927656856 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120978360862 0.067059652881 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299065940094 0.210909579961 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452207103482 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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