TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you

Is there any sort of reliability without internet? It is quite obvious that internet has captured its empire in the current scenario. This revolution of internet has made people to depend completely on it. Basically internet comprises lot of material from the small pin to the largest thing in the world. It is good to be in favor of the statement that Internet provides lot of valuable information. People's dependency on the internet is increasing day by day and internet has achieved the level of trust from the users.
Internet has achieved the status of having useful information because of the number of information providers. Think about the normal book which has limited material provided by particular author but if you look for same material in the internet, it will display number of meanings. It depicts all the information from the origin to the end of the searched item. There are various search engines like google, yahoo etc which has provided option to use only keyword to get full information about anything and even things related to that. Think about the time when it was difficult to get information about any transport medium but now just button clicks are providing exact information of the trains, flight and even buses. In the medical field, a disease name itself on internet reflects all the information from the symptoms to the remedies. There are number of sites to get information about any products and even online shopping is the new trend. In the educational field, internet has abundance of materials, internet is replacing books and even why not? Who will deny to get amount of information in free of cost? Authors have provided soft copies and research papers to the internet which is a boon for the students.
Sometimes too much information creates problems to the people. Too much material for a student leads into disturbance and confusion in the study. Sometimes GPS shows wrong route to the travelers leads to the problem in finding the right way. Information about the minor disease on the internet displays as a serious one from the wrong source.
Revolution of internet has trapped today's generation and gained the level of trust from the people. It is positive to say that internet provides valuable information but too much information leads to the confusion or misinterpretation of the information.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1067, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny getting'.
Suggestion: deny getting
...lacing books and even why not? Who will deny to get amount of information in free of cost? ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'sort of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303102625298 0.229887763892 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.143198090692 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0763723150358 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0334128878282 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0238663484487 0.0685040099705 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138424821002 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.035799522673 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73975004992 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405727923628 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112171837709 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00477326968974 0.0209618222197 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0143198090692 0.0139019557991 103% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2345.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99744245524 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373401534527 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289002557545 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217391304348 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120204603581 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73975004992 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3885221222 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7727272727 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0160662038 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.590909091 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.227272727273 0.644075263715 35% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.6729830272 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.38095238095 1.45489161554 164% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333799028875 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116160480612 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0545786125594 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554470163777 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110570575294 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14938702006 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707776191942 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.508923575304 0.336927656856 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0637514208456 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263379976811 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452854567554 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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