As People rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology is more appropriate, when it is used for its actual cause. Science and technology together played a vital role in making the implausible possible. Since there are lot of inventions and experiments going around the world, almost all the field are filled up with technology and few other fields are yet to be discovered. For example in medicine, nano robots came into picture to find the cancer prone cells and reduced the spreading of virus further, while on the other hand satellites, which finds out the weather patterns and reports immediately about any climatic changes.
Importance of technology comes in several field. But the drawbacks of technologies were also raising on the contrary. For instance, virtual reality which is considered to be the next big thing in the society seems to be exciting, But we forget about the impacts which it can produce in the human society. People may totally get immersed in to virtuality and loose their logical capabilities about the real world. Certain tech inventions are developed for the purpose of entertainment, yet there are several consequences which we forget to answer here.
On the contrary, technology as always been a supportive measure to make us work and unite in an improved way of life. One such idea is communication, it has been considered the most important innovations of mankind. Which helps us not only to commute with one another, it also gives us a way to send videos, do live streaming, access data from anywhere through cloud. All these enhancements truly made our life easy, but there is always blackhole exist, we can also send unauthorised data like virus and make cyber security threats. So there is a always good and bad exist in all the innovations.
Even though technology has opened few threats, it has given us the confidence for our economical growth through communication, medicine, engineering and various other fields. Making use of the right thing in a right way become more appropriate, since there always a loophole exists. People who try to go through the loop hole will enter and rational people always try to avoid it. Growth of science and technology is always required, since the supports technology provide us is indefinite.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'several fields'.
Suggestion: several fields
.... Importance of technology comes in several field. But the drawbacks of technologies were...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...tally get immersed in to virtuality and loose their logical capabilities about the re...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...here. On the contrary, technology as always been a supportive measure to make us work an...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ake cyber security threats. So there is a always good and bad exist in all the in...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... it has given us the confidence for our economical growth through communication, medicine,...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...r fields. Making use of the right thing in a right way become more appropriate, since there al...
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Line 7, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'supports'' or 'support's'?
Suggestion: supports'; support's
...echnology is always required, since the supports technology provide us is indefinite.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225490196078 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.164215686275 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105392156863 0.0880659088768 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612745098039 0.0497285424764 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0441176470588 0.0444667217837 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107843137255 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0392156862745 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79959299974 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269607843137 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00490196078431 0.0016655270985 294% => OK
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00980392156863 0.0249443105267 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2233.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 370.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03513513514 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351351351351 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259459459459 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181081081081 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135135135135 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79959299974 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575675675676 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 66.2391511283 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5555555556 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2664306694 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.055555556 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 46.5015015015 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.38181818182 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318215501876 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0734648625898 0.123202303941 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0517598223513 0.077325440228 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47757138756 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120892889743 0.149214159877 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116703991875 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511131092912 0.0892212321368 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353573414719 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0727494252923 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222454705843 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423055049438 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.