This is an interesting topic. Every people have different opinions. But my experience says that past teachers are far better than today's teachers. Because in past if we discuss about hermits, they not only taught lessons but also they gave them good morals. They also taught manners, responsibility, how in future he/she comfortable in his/her livings.
And if we compare with past teachers and today's teachers, then in past they taught not only subject lessons but also done meditation, so that they increased their memory power. My personal experience is , when i read Sanskrit, it's very difficult for me capture the subject. But when a old sir taught me, he just taught to me in a technique, so that i got very good score.
Now a days new technologies are coming. So that obviously teachers have minimum require knowledge, because student also
know about the world by help of social networking sites and newspaper , i.e both have to be updated..Now a days people smartly see the classes videos from Youtube and it's help them to understand the topic very easier..So that means in school, teachers have given less priority. And today there is no PT teachers in school. Many seats are vacant..From this line we clearly understand that about teachers how loves to school or not. Today they also demand money for teaching students. So that poor people if less money, then for him it's difficult to go tutions or schools.
So in conclusion teachers means help students with no hope. because today's students are the future of this generation and future generation also. So if teachers were taught them well, then they can build a beautiful world..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24025974026 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0974025974026 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0844155844156 0.046263068375 182% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0811688311688 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12987012987 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0162337662338 0.0351676179071 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.59139076992 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162337662338 0.0309702414327 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0551948051948 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00324675324675 0.0209618222197 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1683.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 280.0 408.028673835 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01071428571 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346428571429 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253571428571 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171428571429 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110714285714 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59139076992 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 57.6521477797 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4705882353 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3669476755 48.84282405 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.54480286738 379% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.8277310924 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.27956989247 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24674279104 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0805546948862 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070120085744 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457173810372 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154648030094 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761633127243 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06748350667 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2119437635 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962462248675 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135313293049 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574821964914 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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