I think blood relation is more stronger than anyone comments about personal life. Family persons stand first about family personal matter. I think the extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is more important for deciding about future plan of family persons. Because they know better as they came in that line and so that they know how to build up students carrier.
Due to development of modern technologies, people think they can take their own decision. That's completely wrong. May be we catch up the wrong roads, so that in future we face problem. Before going to take your decision, first listens about family interest. If match both of interest, then you can go ahead.
As many people live in town, they omit their relations from their mind which was previously lasted in village. As in village people lived with each other, and they created family intimacy atmosphere which was very fun and interesting. But today we feel that a short family with maximum 4 to 5 members is the best. So that they can take their own decisions and maintain family economy is easy. In medium class family, husband with wife must require to do job, so that they can easily handle their family and a convenient life.
Finally, everything has merits and demerits. But living with whole family is one type of best circle communications than living with a short family.
- Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than today 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
I think blood relation is more stronger than anyone comments about personal lif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e and so that they know how to build up students carrier. Due to development of mode...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...think they can take their own decision. Thats completely wrong. May be we catch up th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...r own decision. Thats completely wrong. May be we catch up the wrong roads, so that in...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
... family, husband with wife must require to do job, so that they can easily handle the...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236641221374 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.145038167939 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103053435115 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0534351145038 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763358778626 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13358778626 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0190839694656 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41596281512 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190839694656 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.00763358778626 0.00188951952338 404% => OK
Determiners: 0.0381679389313 0.0887237588012 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190839694656 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114503816794 0.0139019557991 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1379.0 2387.08602151 58% => OK
No of words: 234.0 408.028673835 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89316239316 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34188034188 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200854700855 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145299145299 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.112833075102 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41596281512 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 64.8735432988 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 14.625 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4860460164 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 34.7104700855 45.7405998639 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.41666666667 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271411655495 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102651730487 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0976880400719 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467859253629 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135115837737 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090679855709 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729329421893 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.202875581844 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0163505870176 0.067059652881 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163081359685 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524316601218 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.