Nowadays the social media has become widespread. The media which covers news include television, radio, newspapers, and internet. Some people believe that in order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. I completely agree with this idea for the following reasons.
First of all, the journalists which work in broadcasting firms and prepare data for the news will be in fan of the ideology of the firm. In fact each news broadcast does have a special view and policy. As a result, inadvertently or not, the journalist's report of an incident may be biased. Her report may not cover all the facts about an issue which is also trying not to change the real topic. She may ignore some required information about the incident by just overlooking some critical parts. As a result, getting information from a specified source of news may cause losing the real event for the readers.
Secondly, even if the journalists are unbiased, they may not be able to cover all the news around the country or around the world depending on their field of responsibility. Consequently, if a reader is used to check a particular source of media, she may lose some information about her surroundings cause the news on that specific media may not cover all important news. In my opinion, it is somehow natural. Besides, I believe that the people would better get information from different news sources in the abstract world since it may enhance the chance of getting all data. For example, you may read a newspaper in the morning that it does not include an incident which has happened at 4.00 am. However if you check the news online on their websites, the chance of losing that news will be reduced since online broadcasts usually cover all of the events in a very short time after taking place.
To conclude, a person must get information from many different news sources in order to be well-informed as substantiated by my reasons above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: However,
...incident which has happened at 4.00 am. However if you check the news online on their w...
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Suggestion: many
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237196765499 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153638814016 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0619946091644 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0512129380054 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431266846361 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0431266846361 0.0351676179071 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7647411526 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0161725067385 0.0309702414327 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132075471698 0.0887237588012 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0377358490566 0.0209618222197 180% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.010781671159 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1974.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85756676558 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323442136499 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228486646884 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163204747774 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112759643917 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7647411526 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501483679525 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.9344308702 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8235294118 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4269506595 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.117647059 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 42.6721941002 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.70652173913 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298558969526 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0959240936858 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660022930364 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515534092097 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187895482824 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125018156669 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106387570107 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331055981845 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.186322371956 0.067059652881 278% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274170557567 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109054446313 0.0618886996521 176% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.